Loved it!

Could we maybe have a sequel? It could be about Marinette and Adrian learning/discovering/finding their parents. Adrian could learn that Gabriel is his father (and we learn what happened to his mother). And Marinette could find her parents and she recognizes them because they haven't changed much but they don't recognize her because she's so very different from the 6 year old they remember. For some reason they have to board the Chat Noir, so the entire time she's trying to be the cold pirate captain/overprotective/tell them 'oh, hey, I'm your daughter' and has absolutely no how to react and is sending everyone mixed signals. Adrian encourages her to tell them and the rest of the crew are like 'tell them or get them off the ship!' cause they all want their captain back.

I loved this so much! Please write a sequel!

One question here: Why do you refer to Chat Noir as "he"? Traditionally, ships are "she". Did you know that and purposely say "he", or did you not know that at all?

Just curious. Loved the story!

I LOVE the relationship between Ladybug and Jagged (and Fang!)! It is TOO funny!

And all the colors in Adrien's tail, oh yes...

"Pointen" is an interesting word. I may just have to *ahem* borrow it someday.

I'm loving this story! (As you probably already know. I wouldn't read to ch9 and review if I didn't, after all!)

This story is absolutely amazing, and I would love to see a sequel if you are willing!

But why did you make ch11 and 13 the saaaame?!

I mean I love it but all that hype and we don't get to see her crew interacting with mer adrien? Low blow man.

I like this story! Please keep updating

Oooh I love this! And that ending was so perfect! *hearts*

OH MY GOOOOOD! This was actually a great story! I couldn’t put it down! Please don’t tell me it’s the last chapter... I NEED MORE! Please...

what a way to end it.

You should totally continue this. It is so good and I just love it!

Update? :(