| Reviews for Taylor gets a Bodyguard |
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  erik chapter 7 . 9/30/2019 An engrossing story. |
 YeTianshi chapter 5 . 4/2/2019 Huh... Didn't even notice I got to the 5th chapter, the chapters are a bit short, thought I was on my 2nd. The story seems to move a bit too quickly with little explained, I think it would be much smoother if you described interactions with more depth, it probably would have been nice to see the conversation between the OC and Taylor from Taylor's perspective. |
| YeTianshi chapter 1 . 4/2/2019 Not gonna lie, stuff like this confuse the crap out of me. Why introduce a male/female character for a couple of paragraphs and then turn them into the opposite gender? I don't understand it, most of the time the complication never gets mentioned either, I really hope there is a point to it in the future chapters. |
| Face Yourself chapter 3 . 3/25/2019 I... wow, so like I said, the story idea was interesting, it's just... really poorly executed. That and I'm used to authors being clueless about PRT threat ratings, but power categories too...? This has gone from interesting to plain annoying between the pointless extra powers, utter irrationality of actions, and simple ignorance of the setting you're writing in. |
| Face Yourself chapter 2 . 3/25/2019 ... So a perfectly normal guy instantly turns around and has no trouble killing people unprovoked, out of nowhere? There's a lot of things that basically dying and being dropped in another body will do to someone, but that is not one of them. |
| Face Yourself chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 You know... this sounds pretty interesting, but I somehow can't see "Lucy" giving Our Hero red hair, knowing it'll remind Taylor of Emma. |
| Edocsiru chapter 1 . 3/9/2019 Piggot good lady? Apologist much? If you want Armsmaster death you should want piggot burning on the stake lol |
| SeanHicks4 chapter 7 . 1/31/2019 Interesting take, looking forward to seeing some more |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 More More More More More More More More More More More More More More |
| carwash36 chapter 7 . 5/21/2018 Awesome |
| the DragonBard chapter 1 . 3/21/2018 The Changer power mentioned is another Stranger power. Stranger powers are stealth or infiltration based, like disguising yourself as someone else. If it can copy powers, it's a Trump power. Changer means you have a battle form like Hulk or Colossus from the X-Men Striker powers means a close range power. Just knowing Kung Fu doesn't count, and at most would be a Thinker power. |
| PasiveNox chapter 7 . 3/17/2018 It’s great |
| shugokage chapter 7 . 3/10/2018 Interesting chapter and scene! |
| AnimeA55Kicker chapter 7 . 3/10/2018 At this rate worm is going to run out of villains. |
| AnimeA55Kicker chapter 6 . 3/10/2018 Giant. Brass. Balls. |
