Reviews for Alternate Beginning: Endings of Old and Beginnings New
Madi H chapter 8 . 1/30
Is this continuing? I loved it!
Revanchist21 chapter 7 . 12/1/2018
This story is very innovative,interesting and amazing! I really hope you will have more chapters in the near future soon since this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man! Hope you will have more chapters in the near future soon!
xxyangxx2006 chapter 7 . 8/16/2018
Well I am glad they are on better terms and she is starting to learn how to survive being the object of Megatron's affection. I do worry though that she is going to snap at being exhausted at pretending to be cute... or it will just become habit for her. I do like Grace's family unit and how the cassettes, even though they apologized to Eleanor for their own sake and she denied it, learned that us squishies are meant to be treated with care XD. It was nice to see all the bonding in this chapter. The ever present cyberformation possibility still has me worried as always, as does the state of the Earth and those humans Eleanor was close to and her mental state in general.
It is so weird no longer seeing the rebellion leader Eleaniris who was able to keep most of her fire, but also morph it into something new. Not saying this current iteration of Elwanor doesn't have her own fire, but it is a much more warm one instead of a blazing raging one... I just reread that and have no idea where or what I was going to do with that thought but thought I would leave it in haha. Can't wait to see how you wrap this bit up and can't say that i won't miss it when you do. Great job and keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/11/2018
Great update!
xxyangxx2006 chapter 6 . 8/7/2018
And I am back! Thanks again for the concern PM and I am glad I don't have too much to catch up on... but nevertheless Eleanor really is having one bad thing after another happen to her. In this chapter she has had a nightmare, vitamin deficiencies after having lack of muscles from her limbs not being used, an improperly healed leg, and more feelings of fear, uselessness, and degradation. I almost want her to be cyberformed soon so she won't be in as much dire straights as these. I was also happy to see Grace make an appearance again and Wilson the the boys haha, but their appearance now and Megatron's soon to be absence to get her more things to help keep her healthy and comforted has me really nervous... and that last entrance feels like Inmay have wrote a run on, but oh well XD. Can't wait to set what you have happen next and keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/19/2018
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
kate chapter 5 . 4/25/2018
OK worth the wait! Very good! VERY VERY GOOD! So a-bit about Soundwave and Grace? maybe? What about Prime? More Please Soon! This is one of my rave's. _
xxyangxx2006 chapter 5 . 4/23/2018
I am so glad she is starting to ask questions and feeling able to do so as well. It was refreshing to see and she got some information she needed out of him. It does make me nervous though with every step forward that there will be four steps back, but what can I do except hope. I am also nervous to how this Elenor will react to her future cyberformation considering all she has gone through physically and mentally. Also... that thing that happened with the energy tendrils... I was glad it calmed her down but towards the end there it seemed like that could turn out really bad really fast. Great job on everything and keep up the great work as always!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/21/2018
Great new chapter!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/21/2018
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
HurricaneFox chapter 5 . 4/21/2018
Poor Eleanor. Hope he gives her proper eating utensils soon.
kate chapter 4 . 3/16/2018
Oh my this is darker than your original. But I like it! _ Will other OC's make an appearance? Will Sam from the movie? or Will? _ I hope for more soon. _
Guest chapter 4 . 3/15/2018
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
xxyangxx2006 chapter 4 . 3/16/2018
My heart for Eleanor this chapter. Learned Helplessness is a terrible thing for a person to experience and knowing what she was like before these events makes it hurt even worse! I am glad that Megatron is trying to find out what is wrong, but so much is needed to know about a human psyche and he is looking through the haze of "she loves me already deep down". He is getting better, and I am thankful that Soundwave got involved in determining her mental trauma early on. Can't wait to see how all of this is solved in the long run, and what Eleanor will be like at the end of this journey. Keep up the great work!
xxyangxx2006 chapter 3 . 2/17/2018
Well then... I thought it would be a case of Soundwave just forgetting about her and locking her up somewhere without food or water till the last moment... And it wa s that and his cassettes beat her... poor Eleanor. That and it was sad, and a tad bit cute, that Megatron thought her bruising wa s some kind of tattoo he had never seen on her before. I mean, his mate is human. You would think he would try to learn everything there was to be human to make sure he never messed up in the 1stt place, instead of something going wring, and then finding out what it is and what is needed to fix it. But he is Megatron I suppose, and doesn't want to know about "lower life forms". Also, I wonder what the cassettes punishments will be, and how truly sorry Soundwave is after he truly saw what his neglect did. Great job as always and keep up the great work as usual.
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