Reviews for Lost Souls (UP FOR ADOPTION PM me to let me know & give me credit)
ChaoticMinds chapter 17 . 5/5/2019
Lol, I just love Bepo so much! He's so adorable~! I just want to give him a HUGEEEEEE hug!
GreenDrkness chapter 17 . 10/12/2018
Time skip? or are you gonna write out her years at Hogwarts?
I love how sassy Lami is and I love love love Luna so I'm very happy you had them be friends
Guest chapter 18 . 9/8/2018
If you would be ok with it, i wouldn't mind taking Lost Souls, I love the story, and have a few ideas for it, but I wouldn't have the time to devote to it fully, it probably would only be updated every few weeks
Guest chapter 18 . 9/8/2018
I wouldn't mind taking Lost Souls, but it would only be updated every month or so
Sakihinata chapter 18 . 9/8/2018
Oh...
It's ok, things happen, it was fun while it lasted.
I hope you're alright though ;)
DarkBlur2005 chapter 18 . 9/7/2018
Well... That came out of nowhere. It's fine though. I hope whatever caused you to leave ends well.
ellainaparker chapter 17 . 9/7/2018
its a great story
Sakura Lisel chapter 17 . 9/4/2018
Dumbledore should give them a magical, self-refilling books, that does the exact same thing as the paper is going to do. At least the book will STORE all the letters neatly inside of it, and is enchanted to refill itself when they run out of pages and automatically resizing itself to fit each new page that refills the book. *lol* With the size of her 'family' everybody's going to be wanting to be writing letters back and forth with her and vice versa.

Though maybe MORE than one book for EVERYBODY on the crew. That way they can send their letters to her separately instead of having to take turns with the book so they can have some privacy in what they write to her that the rest of the crew won't see. With Lami's solitary book getting each letter when they arrive.
Fafa chapter 16 . 8/2/2018
Maybe, do some time skip until you take her to Punk Hazard but mentioning what she had been learning. Perhaps she would first learn to do that transportation spell so she's able to go there.
Some tidbits about her birth family and interaction with others. I assume with how she is, she isn't really able to connect with Hogwarts save for the place where she learns and having a few friends, if not the only friend in Luna. I'm not sure if you really want her in that fight with Voldemort seeing as she doesn't listen to Dumbledore and what her view of all their fight is. Perhaps a talk with Law will make her decide. Those are some ideas
61394 chapter 16 . 7/23/2018
Great so Moldy Voldy is still around
he's probably in the New World then
Greer123 chapter 16 . 7/23/2018
Glad to see that Lami can get along with the Headmaster.
BloodKills-Matt chapter 16 . 7/22/2018
I love the story, and this chapter was fine (Although I did think Law would be a bit more hot headed in that situation), but I would rather her be there for Dressrosa and Punk Hazard
Sakura Lisel chapter 16 . 7/22/2018
Wait everybodys talking about LAMI staying here like shes going to stay ALONE at Hogwarts, while Law and the gang do what exactly? Have Dumbledore send them back home without her and leave her alone in this strange and unknown place with a old man who ALREADY kidnapped her, and them, and brought them all here against their wills? Law and Lami haven't even asked about AFTER school is done. *lol* if Law and the crew go back to the One Piece world without her while she goes to school, unless the old man is willing to recast the spell to send her home over the holidays, then bring her back for school, whats Dumbledores secret plans for Lamis holidays and whatever?
Excalibur98 chapter 16 . 7/22/2018
NANI! Please i need more! This is starting to get really interesting! And thanks for the update!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/26/2018
She is a brat.
82 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »