| Reviews for All I Want for Christmas is You(r Last Name) |
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Dwarrior chapter 6 . 2/10/2018 This story was Great... So cute and really, really sweet... Keep up the awesomeness... |
FicsFromAnAnbuNin chapter 6 . 2/8/2018 This was a good chapter. It had a few awkward moments that I wouldn't think would happen between the adults and teenagers, but the rest was good. Alya being Alya was funny as well. |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2018 Great job as always! |
isagrecia chapter 6 . 2/5/2018 Thus is such a beautiful story, I really like that you use grammar correctly and that the characters are very three dimensional. Keep up the good work. |
Cliffhanger lover chapter 6 . 2/3/2018 perfect thing to read after just waking up |
Sonochu chapter 2 . 2/3/2018 While I really like this story, the fact that half the dialogue seems to be focused on the idea of having a baby is a little disconcerting. These characters are around 19l8 (probably a little younger). Many teenagers don't even want kids, much less are willing to talk very openly about their desire for kids in the near future. |
mayuralover chapter 6 . 2/3/2018 That was such a great date! And it's quite funny that the adults expect them to...do the deed. Oh! It seems like you left in some commentary to yourself or your beta reader: [His eyes had yet to leave hers. ]- move or lose this (keep it, I like it) Somewhere in the middle is this |
Grapefruit101 chapter 6 . 2/3/2018 please continue this story i really like it. |
yellow 14 chapter 6 . 2/2/2018 A really cute chapter. I love how embarrassing Tom and Sabine are. Keep updating |
ariolfo101 chapter 1 . 2/2/2018 Oh Dear God, I LOVE IT! Adrien Dupain Cheng, it's so cute. I love how you imagined him thinking abut the future and Marinette. It'seems she's gotten more confident. But Ladybug wasn't mentioned at all! Has he gotten over her? I hope he has. |
Missmathdork1608 chapter 5 . 1/20/2018 I'M GOING TO FUCKING CRY I LOVE THIS. PUREST FIC I HAVE EVER READ. WHAT EVEN. YOU'RE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER. |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/17/2018 C101 The ending was confusing how did they start planning the wedding. Not to mention when did they tell Gabriel. Plus you should of put marks or a time skip. Because they will not get married a few days after they started dating. This chapter is really confusing so can you edit it well rewrite it |
FicsFromAnAnbuNin chapter 5 . 1/17/2018 Another amazing chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next at the gala. I wonder if Gabriel will show up suddenly and approve of their relationship. |
FicsFromAnAnbuNin chapter 4 . 1/17/2018 I wonder if Alya and Nino will make the connection in the next chapter. I find it kind of funny that Marinette asked Adrien before he could ask her. The chapter was amazing. |
FicsFromAnAnbuNin chapter 3 . 1/17/2018 This was a super sweet chapter and I really like how Nino and Alya play into the story as well. |