| Reviews for Jaune and the Lands of Termina |
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Blue heart chapter 14 . 1h Hey I was just reading the reviews and found something interesting. Two people have an idea that is a what if for the story. The what if is that one of ozma and Salem's daughters was saved and put into cryosleep by fairies and sheiks and that as she was slowly healing that she would have an astro projection of herself seeing everything that is going of. How she starts to hate her parents because they have a stupid battle against each other that kills so many people. Eventually she would wake up a few years before jaune adventure and be trained in the ways of the sheika while refusing to have her aura unlocked because all aura is just a crutch so many people rely on and she only let's it become activated so she could blend in with jaune at beacon. Examples of over use of aura. Yang would rely on it to much to take hits for her and guess what. She is now missing an arm because of her arrogance with her semblance and not thinking ahead along with a fighting style that has no defense moves till she gets her wake up call. I can imagine that if you did do this course of action and that ozpin does find out his daughter is alive he will be like "my baby" before she kicks him in the crotch and leaves his on the ground moaning in pure pain. When Salem see her daughter. She ends up with a punch to the gut before being hugged tightly then smacked upside the head. Lots of things will be happening Hey wonder if the mirror shield can effect grim. Probably going to have to keep ruby away from all of the legend of zelda weapons. |
CrimsonSylvan chapter 14 . 5h Well...that bit with Ingo was a bit depressing but now comes the question of 'Do those Jaune has killed that aren't the boss monsters come back after he kills them?' Cause if so maybe once Jaune gets the stone mask he just walks onto the Gorman brothers ranch and steals the mask while they can't see him along with stealing the masks they use to poorly hide their identities in the chase part.(It only covers their heads and it doesn't hide their voices plus they wear their usual clothes.) Also yeah Majora controlled Skull Kid is childish enough that he would call Jaune's own soul acting as a passive shield/healing buff/stat buff a Hack and try to remove that. More so if Jaune had access to his semblance. On another note you never did answer my question of Jaune keeping his ability to use magic once he gets out of Termina. I mean clearly he'll still need it to effectively use the strongest abilities of the transformation masks and maybe to use the abilities of any other masks he gets that have effects. On a final note I'm kinda curious if having aura and using the blast mask would mean that Jaune could use said mask until his aura is nearly depleted and not suffer injury from being a suicide bomber. |
Legomanny chapter 14 . 7/23 Wow I just drawn remnant Fi! Design is complete now the color. Now let me just revie-...you just add a new chapter...* #$! I was hoping to review that chapter! Now looks like I’m reviewing both of them in one review...I’m ok with that ok so wow the brothers nice to combine that and the aliens and the aliens are still mysterious good job. And...wow that was brutal even for me but the young girl is safe!...scarred but safe! But man one brother dies and the other tries to kill Jaune and man when Jaune killed him...I felt his did a good job on him and man he is true that with the orcrina resets...it make you think terrible stuff,just ask the player from undertale They know how terrible the resets are. Now on to the next chapter man Jaune and Romani doing it was well unexpected but not surprising since they are old enough and drunk enough to do it. But man just sadness and sadness with some happy moments that feel small. But Jaune Saying that...just ...man that is emotional and now it makes me want to root for Jaune to win so the people in termina can rest easily. And man now it makes me think of what you said...would he has his virginity reset as well?. Well I will not think of that but now Jaune is ready to take out the third boss and I want to see it get destroyed!. Ok now for my comments people asking about Jaune aura being inactive during the whole initiation until the first spar now I want to imagine everyone’s faces to realize that Jaune had no arua, and not only he survived but fought against Grimm very well. Now. My project. I was drawing a version of Fi in remnant for this story that I will message you hope you like it. |
Reader chapter 1 . 7/23 Hey encryption I agree with thee other person talked about ozpin and salam's children surviving their fight but only one survived but barely only to be saved by one of fairy's and then taken to the sheikah to be properly healed from her near fatal injury's impa the leader of the tribe See's that the child will play an important roll in stopping her parents and aiding the hero on his quest so they put her in cryostase so her wounds can heal jest like the last reviewer posted she See's the terrible things that her parents had done even involving the people in their pointless war seeing so much death and destruction and the false gods restarting everything and not doing their duty giving up on hope and seeing that they are forever trapped in this cycle of destruction and rebirth then impa walk's in to chamber and hears the young one crying in astral form impa soon decides to tell her about the legendary hero as the young one hears more about the hero the more she realise how different he is to her father for that displayed what true courage really is after hearing the story the young girl decided when she is back at full health she will ask impa to train her in the his of sheikah and to help aid the hero when he completed his trails in the unknown land. Now then we know that Zelda and ganondorf will be their own character in the story that will be written soon so I hope that you chose the people who'll become the new sage's well that's it for now see ya. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/23 Amazing |
Alvelvnor chapter 6 . 7/21 is it weird that I want him to get the Mastercycle? I know, wrong game. but it's just so cool and was never able to be fully appreciated because it was only obtained post-game(DLC). Also nobody asked but this is my second favorite Zelda after Twilight princess. |
RT7 chapter 14 . 7/20 Awesome story. Love it so far, waiting eagerly for the next chapter whenever it comes. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/19 This story is very good, it is in the top 10 Rwby much better than Volumes V5, V6, V7, to be honest Rwby has lowered its quality in history a lot but this Fanfic is a marvel with all the letters, by God I look forward the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/19 You can have Jaune create a song like Tapion DBZ's, (data from that movie is inspired by Zeda Ocarina Time XD). Very good story, I look forward to the next part. Another idea is that Jaune's magic earrings hide her Hylian ears and the earrings can be a Talt's Farewell Gift, these can have the shape of a bunny or a heart, just because it would make you laugh, see a subject that you see Tough with earrings in that XD shape. |
Nameless chapter 14 . 7/19 This is from left field but are the Faunus going to get a backstory on why the humans hate them in this story. Because in most LoZ games I played all the sentient races don’t really seem to have any real issues with one another even though they have radically different physical appearance and capabilities. Yet for some reason in the RWBY universe we are told humans and faunus have never really gotten along with one another despite both the faunus being mostly human. I was just wondering is your story going to give a better answer than in RWBY. Maybe they had something to do with why all the other races are in hiding and the humans retaliated because of it. |
Blue Grace chapter 14 . 7/18 This is a good story and the man character is actually down to earth and feels real. This story is not like those stories that suddenly change a person after the person had one sudden experience. It takes multiple experiences to mold someone and you have molded this young are very well. With the timelines of legend of zelda I'm going to assume that majora's mask never happened for ocorina of time link. This is a new chapter for the hero who has been there when the world needed them. Hey when will he get some more bottles. He's going to really need them for the future. He will also need to learn how to make them as well. For the last cycle you should have jaune preparing for the fight against majora while doing a little good. First he knocks out the two brothers who would have destroyed the ranch before he goes to where the thief is and knocks him out and brings him to the authorities. Next he will have to kill some gerudo but he knows the ins and outs of their fortress to rescue those babies. Next he brings the sun mask to purple lover boy so he can be with his bride. Next he turns a little girls daddy back into a human. Next he has enough bottles of medicine to last him for a while. During the fight jaune should start out strong but as time goes on majora starts to get the upper hand. This would cause jaune to start faltering in his fight and become afraid but as another strike is about to happen time freezes for him. He finds himself in a strange world that looks like final world in kingdom hearts 3. All around him his past reincarnations appear and talk to him. One of them talks to him and is the spokesman for them all. They all tell him that they have all been afraid before when they had fought their most dangerous opponents. They told him that they all were like him some nobody who ended up being the person with the most burdens. The told him that it's for who they are fighting for that they have courage. With that jaune gains courage again because he remembers who he is fighting for. Time resumes and jaune fight with more heart and with that the triforce appears and fuses into his hand and with that piece of the triforce the fierce diety mask appears and jaune ends the fight fast. As the mask falls to the ground jaune hears his ancestors one last time. They say "your are our living legacy," and then the image of the master sword appears in him mind and then he hears he is ancestors again. "Find the master sword for it will serve you well in your journey." Have a nice one |
Reader chapter 14 . 7/17 So jaune is heading to the canyon but he is only able to go to the graveyard though wonder will he be able to handle the dead spirits of an army that served the ikana Royal family now that I think about if termina is in a terrible state because of majora doesn't that means that remnant is in a terrible state as well then that means that the souls who have died in the wars between ospin and salam are probably filled with anger and hatred toward them including some of the souls who where silver eyed warriors whe used to trust ospin only to be killed as well its possible that these sad souls has chosen to warn those that will visit the valley of the dead do not trust the fallen knight or the fallen princess both are nothing but liers and slaves to fate. |
Avalon gx chapter 14 . 7/17 Hey an Idea for later on in the series Jaune danm summon the fierce diety mask by swiping his hand in front of his face summoning it like a hollow mask from the anime series bleach. |
Avalon gx chapter 14 . 7/16 Wait, ruby drinks milk all of the time so when jaune hears that then he will be thinking that ruby gets drunk all of the time. Also keep ruby away from the master sword or else she will tie it to a stick and try to use it like a scythe. Hey how about during one of the matches of the festival in remnant while some teams are fighting each other. Jaune and ganondorf break through the roof fighting on falling pieces of debris and ends with both of them doing a powerful magic attack and then finally jaune stabs his sword straight through ganondorf's chest. Everyone is just trying to figure out what the heck just happened in front of them. |
Avalon gx chapter 14 . 7/15 I don't know why but something tells me all of the rwby cast but Jaune are going to be stupid and accidentally unleash Gannon. Do you think salem and ozpin are knock offs of what zelda and link are that the brothers tried to create because Salem was a blond and ozma was at the time wearing green gear. Another idea with dealing with the gerudo Jaune chucking a cucko at them then hides behind his shield Hey when jaune gets the fierce diety mask you could have him go into combat like a certain substitute soul reaper from bleach. When ganondorf comes back from wherever he has been hiding he is not going to want to share his throne with salem. Most likely he would hill half of her forces while stripping salem of her grim towers so he could make hybrids. You should have it that the power and wisdom pieces of the triforce are shattered and ganondorf only has a couple of the power fragments and that's what's keeping him alive. The triforce of courage is the only one still in one piece and it has secretly been hidden in links decedents and it will only go to the one who will show great courage against something that would have anyone be afraid. Jaune going again majora is him having courage to face his fear and awaken the triforce. With jaunes new clothing he should definitely have some green on it to represent his ancestors. When ozpin learns of the triforce he will probably try to go behind everyone's necks to get the thing for his greater good reason that only end with disaster. Hey when jaune finds the master sword maybe have him be pulled into a deep sleep when he grabs the handle of the blade. Puts him through a kingdom hearts dream thing where he will learn of what happened to hyrule along with testing his worthiness of wielding the master sword. Hey in the ocean temple will jaune fight a shadow version of himself? Jaune can probably help oscar out by bringing him to a great fairy you can give oscar some more time so ozpin won't take him over like the parasite that he is. Hey an idea. One of Salem and ozpin daughters is alive but she has been in cryostasis thanks to fairies finding her and putting her in the revival chamber. Only thing is is that she had slowly aged due to the machine being damaged so she would be waking up around jaunes age when he stumbles upon her. You could have it that she is afraid of her parents because of seeing her parents fighting along with while asleep she would have an astral form that would explore the world and she would see the horrible things that her parents have done. She could be a possible knowledge candidate. |