Reviews for Shinobi Transformation!
Jose19 chapter 3 . 7/11
The skills taught by Miyabi will conflict with the actual Toad Summons that he needs to control Kurama.
THE-Twilight-BlazeKnight chapter 18 . 8/11/2019
its great to see that this story is active again, man I can't tell you how much I needed this again, and the way that you showcased Naruto gloating was priceless, if not for Miyabi training the stupidity out of him, it would have gone straight to his head, here he felt that his victory was well earn and wanted everyone to know that he won fair and square, and even forced Tsunade to use her whole arm and still won, man its a miracle that Tsunade didn't completely lose it and was just pissy about it, though I'm a bit surprise that the necklace wasn't mentioned at all in this conversation, if it was, then all hell would have broken lose, and the way Jiraiya quickly change the subject was a big help with that, and I really liked the change in the conversation with Naruto and Tsunade about the Hokage and those who gave their lives for the village, it was just a few words but the way it was said was very impactful, and it ad a stronger effect cause of his show of strength.

glad to see more of the other SK girls in action, Haruka sure has been busy with the way she left a pile of dead Yoma bodies everywhere, wonder how her talk with Itachi went, they will defiantly meet again if only for her to cure him, and now Karin is going to be trained a lot more serious to help deal with the rising Yoma, good for her, they'll be needing more people capable of dealing with Yoma in the near future if this keeps up, and man I love the scenes with Katsuragi, especially in the ramen stand LOL, and the scene with Hikage, man that was hot, if that scene had kept going then this story would have evolved into a hentai fanfic, and the way Katsuragi jumped her reminds me of how Lupin the 3rd jumps a girl, guess she's going to have to put tracking down Haruka's group on hold now LOL, anyways gald to see those two finally get together in this fic, wonder which of the others SK girls will hook up with next, looking forward to that.

and now Naruto's group will have to deal with an artificial Yoma, makes me wonder if all the previous Yoma were artificial Yoma created by Jindai using human sacrifices, and speaking of Jindai, I'm starting to think that he's actually an OC form the SK universe, seen how he acts nothing like Dogen, but is very knowledgeable about Yoma and shinobi arts, only one way to find out if he is an OC or not, looking forward to the fight with the Yoma.

overall good chapter, glad to see this story is back in action, keep up the good work ;)
RedBurningDragon chapter 18 . 8/11/2019
... well that happened fast
And possibly where all the yoma have been coming from ... great
Glad to see more pf this
Batthan the Dark Knight chapter 18 . 8/10/2019
If Tsunade meets Katsuragi, she is going to outright blame Jiraiya even though he had nothing to do with Katsuragi's perverted antics. XD

Plus I wonder how Tsunade will react on how Jiraiya took in Naruto as his apprentice, because she would no doubt want to meet someone who made Jiraiya on edge for a good reason.
Thestorm4 chapter 17 . 8/8/2019
waiting for an update, and yeah I agree, Sony becoming censor heavy and Nintendo opening up to more lewd games hahaha, soon they'll censor all of the world if we don't stop them
verifiaman chapter 17 . 5/8/2019
Oh my god this is amazing! you inspired me to make a crossover fic of my own with senran kagura! you even found a use for my favorite character Katsuragi! KATSURAGI!
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
bye bye, bye bye.
THE-Twilight-BlazeKnight chapter 17 . 4/5/2019
great chapter as always my friend, so in this story the SK girls are already friends with the new wave characters then, good to know ;P, and now with the Yoma business, things are going to get more complicated, didn't think that the Nue that Hinata fought was an adolescent one, meaning that they are normally stronger than that, and now the SK girls can't afford to stay in Konoha much longer thanks to the presence of other Yoma out there and that they need to deal with, Danzo won't be happy with shinobi as strong as them not being part of Konoha, but the Hokage will defiantly understand and support them, cause of what the Yoma are capable of seeing how Kurenai was crippled for life by one, he will defiantly see the need to help them deal with them, and I can tell that Danzo will get greedy and try to get his hands on a Yoma, that will defiantly cost him a lot to pull off, wonder how Naruto, Hinata, and Shikamaru will react to the news that their teachers will have to leave the village sooner than they expected, guess I'll have to wait and find out.

nice to see Naruto thinking of Hinata on his trip and wants to buy her a gift, after what she went through, she really needs him to comfort her, and that necklace he got her will defiantly help, and that Jin guy that sold him the necklace, form his description, it sounds like he could be Hanzo, when he's not acting like a pervert, with the way he warned Naruto about the Yoma's being demons that attack at night, and gave him that other necklace charm to ward off danger, and he also knew Hinata's name without Naruto even saying it during their conversation, my guess is he knew who he was from the start cause of the chunin exams were he and Hinata fought and he was there and saw them using the Shinobi Transformation, and that got his attention on both of them.

and with Tsunade's most memorable loss, thanks to Nachi, another effect the SK girls had in the world, Jiraiya found her a lot sooner, hell even Orochimaru found her sooner, in canon they took weeks to find her, here its been only a few hours, and his reaction to the picture was pure gold, I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I ALMOST FELL LOL, and he even had that same picture when he was with Tsunade, wonder how much he paid the guy for a copy LOL, this is something that Tsunade will never live down now that there are pictures of her bush spreading, heh spreading her bush LOL.

and now Orochimaru has meet the new guy in the Akatsuki, and even fixed his arms with what I'm guessing is either Yoma blood, or the blood of one like the SK shinobi with the chakra to cancel out the ice, a part of me want to say that this guy is really Dogen and another part of me thinks is Meiun form Peach Beach Splash, you know the guy that hosted the PBS tournament, but I could be wrong and its someone completely unexpected, guess I'll find out for sure when he fights Jiraiya and Tsunade during the fated meeting with Orochimaru

and boy Naruto still being Naruto during the whole conversation with the group was pretty refreshing, loved his comment when he thought that Jiraiya was confident of his victory and boy did he prove everyone wrong with how they reacted in the end, and that makes all three Sannin suffering a huge blow form Naruto, with Orochimaru the hickey bite on his neck and the punch to the face, with Jiraiya being taken down by his Sexy Jutsu, and now Tsunade losing the bet and that bruise on her arm, Naruto will go down in history as the youngest shinobi to pull this off against the Sannin in this story, and boy I can only imagine the fallout in the next chapter, I can defiantly tell Tsunade won't accept this and refuse to give in and give him the necklace, and everyone telling Naruto to put some damn clothes on LOL.

overall loved this chapter, it was a good read and made me speculate a lot, trying to guess what will happen next, and also happy to hear that the next chapter will be focus on showing what is going on with the other SK girls all over the elemental nations, looking forward to see what their doing and if any new ones will make an appearance ;).
Greer123 chapter 16 . 3/21/2019
I like the way Nachi dealt with Tsunade at the end of this chapter. Also I am sorry to hear about Kurenai and her ninja career.
THE-Twilight-BlazeKnight chapter 16 . 3/19/2019
man great chapter, like how you started out with a bit of SK lore, and the fight with the Nue was really intense, with only two hits Hinata lost her armor, and Kurenai's injuries being so serious, Kiba was lucky to only sustain that much damage from the hit he took, and can still stay as an active shinobi, while Kurenai lost her ninja career with the lost of her arm, man that got so dark so fast, I didn't expect it, but it really added a lot of intensity to the situation, and Hinata having such a strong moments overcoming her fear and become stronger than her past self was a really great moment, and that last attack she did was badass, would have sounded even more badass if she wasn't naked LOL.

and just when things look like they're going to be ok the Nue get back up, and then Yuyaki and Kumi show up and save the day, killing it so easily, was it that weaken from Hinata's attack, or were they just that strong, and after getting them back in town, I'm surprise Hinata didn't notice that she was still in her birthday suit there, or that no one else pointed it out for her until after they got back, guess Shino was in to much of a panic to notice or even offer his coat to her, also good conversation and explanation between them, and even revealing why everyone but Hinata was affected by the Nue's presence alone, and now at this point the only way I see Kurenai making a complete recovery is through Haruka, she the only person at this point that can pull it off, I'm guessing that will be a chapter for the future, and the Akatsuki figure at the end of the fight, wonder if its Dogen, only one way to find out.

and Katsuragi being herself, just priceless and her noticing how those farmers didn't react to badly to her perverted face being the reason why she notice something was of by them was just gold, guess even in pervert mode she is still sharp, I can defiantly tell that these were Danzo's men, who else could it have been, Danzo will defiantly lose more than halve his root forces before he even comes close to some answers LOL, and Katsuragi's being pissed cause she was groped by one of them, and saying only women are allowed to group her, that's a bit surpricing considering in the OVA Ikaruga wanted to grope her and she didn't want to be grope herself, but I geuss if she had to be grope she would want a women groping her, wonder if it was Hikage she was referring to when she said that.

and Tsunade losing all her money to Nachi, I can't think of anyone more appropriate for that than Nachi, that was just priceless LOL, that whole scene was pure gold, if Jiraiya was there he'd be in heaven, guess Tsunade learned a lesson, listen to Shizune more often.

overall great chapter, glad to see your still on a roll, looking forward to the next one ;)
RedBurningDragon chapter 16 . 3/19/2019
Nice chapter
The biggest sucker strikes again
zerodragon chapter 16 . 3/19/2019
nice to see a story using new wave characters in it. hmm i wonder when we see some of my favorite girls. also who is your favorite girls?
Hero of Justice Roxas chapter 16 . 3/19/2019
Well...that was certaintly interesting,this is shaping up to be a good story so far,can't wait to see the next chapter.
aliestrikehero chapter 15 . 2/26/2019
Nue is just Rajang light...

Also, other than the main four, are any other Senran schools here?
Greer123 chapter 15 . 2/15/2019
I loved the situation Itachi has gotten himself into.
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