Reviews for JoJo's Alien Adventure
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/20
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/16
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Joey Joestar chapter 7 . 7/15
This is definitely interesting, but with all things JOJO, Araki forgets...

1) Can Stands shrink or phase through things like in Stardust Crusaders?

2) Will the Bow and Arrow have any relevance?

3) Will Stands, Quirks and Hamon/Spin be separate entities or will someone whose capable of all 3 appear?

4) Doesn't starting off with King Crimson seem a "bit" extreme?

5) Wouldn't it be cooler if someone started off with Echoes?
-No one EVER explores the other abilities it could potentially have like ACT 3 THREE CHEESE!
-Then it could illustrate all 'Stand Evolutionary Points' like the ACTS, Evolution like Bites the Dust or SP:The World and then finally Requiem (Bow and Arrow Relevance Same Origin as Quirks)?

6) Maybe its a to actually say stands and quirks are separate things and hamon/spin was actually the first quirk but it wasn't public like the light baby?

7) Maybe ACT stands slowly gain the abilities of general stands other time like shrinking and phasing but those are still specific to the user personality like how SuperFLY is bound and Remote Stands don't damage the user...
-Basically the characteristics of that Stand Type is gained through ACTS?

8) I just really like how Quirks continue to change and evolve and then maybe stands are extremely reflective of that person's understanding of their quirks natural weakness and strengths which always is out of their control. Naturally this would explain why a Non-Quirk User could have a naturally powerful stand because their personality is NOT consumed with understanding their quirk if a quirk user could even develop one in the first place naturally like Avdol or by B/A.

9) Will Quirk Singularity, Awakening and Mutations still have any relevance in this story even after considering all these other items? (Quirk Wikipedia)

Thanks!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/13
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/9
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ensgavin chapter 6 . 7/11
so I just noticed how it says will cover stardust crussaders through stone ocean, I think it would be cool to have paradox come in after that and be all like hey ben there's and alternate universe that needs you, you'll be helping that universe's version of joseph's grandfather, in a horse race in the 1,800s and then sent to that universe's 2 011 to help their josuke/half jotaro/yoshikage kira/diavolo, known as josuke, to find out who he is.
That's just the idea that popped into my head after I realized that part in the description.
ensgavin chapter 7 . 7/11
I can't wait for the next chapter.
ensgavin chapter 5 . 7/11
When Emerald Ace as Wildmutt turned into Ultimate Wildmutt it was a welcome surprise, honestly I had been expecting Ben to go Ghost Freak and merge with Emerald Ace as Wildmutt, you know use Ghostfreak's intangibility, but then you did Ultimate Wildmutt instead and I was like, oh yeah Ben has the Ultimatrix in this not the Omnitrix.
RocKHord chapter 6 . 7/6
YOU BITCH WHERE IS UPDATE?!WHERE IS 8 PART?
omnimegalander chapter 7 . 7/4
Initially, I was a little iffy on the idea of Ben being a descendant of Caesar, but honestly, that could honestly create something interesting. We know Ben is somewhat special thanks to his paternal grandmother Verdona, but making him related to Caesar would honestly open some interesting avenues. I can kinda see Ben using Hamon to create a sort of "pseudo-spark of the Anodites", letting him manipulate Hamon with the properties of mana, or using Diamondhead to do something like "CYAN CRYSTAL OVERDRIVE!" or "EMERALD SLIME OVERDRIVE!".
Also, it would be fairly interesting for a Zepelli to be involved in the final fight against DIO, given what his minions did to Baron Zepelli. Perhaps DIO could be like: "Ho Ho! So Ben! Not only do you possess the key to my ascension to Ultimate DIO, but you also are of a family intertwined with the Joestars! How amusing that I fight against a Zepelli and Joestar simultaneously once again!" Also, since Ben will be appearing in Parts 4-6, it would give Hamon a way to reappear in those parts, after Joseph stops making his appearances.
Still, it's just something to keep in mind, since I feel that might make Ben a bit too Gary Stu-ish, or maybe I'm just being a little paranoid.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/28
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Seth chapter 7 . 6/5
5 stars 10/10. This story is epic. I am dying to read more. Please update as soon as you can. Can't wait to see what you do for Diamond Is Unbreakable and Golden Wind.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3
So Ben’s Stand resembles Chrono Spanner from Omniverse and might be sentient like Koichi’s Echoes/Reverb Act 3 and Trish’s Spice Girl/Spicy Lady. Also what are Emerald Ace’s stats?
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