Really enjoyed this, must be my third re-read of this story! Interested to see how Ice Cold fits in as well. Thanks for sharing this with us :)

Interesting hope you update this soon.

Don’t know why you haven’t but if you get a chance plz continue this story is way to good to be dropped

Only problem with characterisation so far is that Taylor couldn’t use her bug’s senses, practically at all, when she was at this point.

I liked your original story, and often fear rewrites, but you did an excellent job on this. The additions explain the action (Sophia's paranoia and lack of sleep as part of the reason for her attach on Amy) Characterizations are deeper. Good job, and if the muse hits I'd like to see more.

Great story thanks for writing!

Loving this, and hope to see a new chapter sometime soon.:)

A fun story. I hope you get back to it some day. I would like to see what happens next.

Thanks for all the hard work!

Nicholas

Love it. Hope you update soon!

An entertaining story.

But now he’ll just be known as the token black guy. How about you bring in a Hawaiian superhero? Then no one will accuse New Wave of tokenism.

Please let there be more I'm enjoying the story.

I don't think I've ever read a worm fic where New Wave actually picked up steam and started becoming a movement, is that what's happening here? Glad I found this fic, really enjoyed it, Thanks for Writing! Now I'm off to find some of your other fic.

Coil seems alittle to interested in Taylor there 'He would solve this problem' seems to me like she should (in his mind) be just another piece on his chess board only just notable. I'm probably overthinking. Now I'm tempted to delete this but for posterity. Anyway, Thanks for Writing!

Ah painkillers, also the Empire came off abit different from what I'd usual I like it.