Gahh I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Poor John, he's not taking this well. Rightfully so, in my opinion. I can't imagine how I would feel if I were forced into a relationship with a man, as I'm generally perceived to the world as a female. It would crush me, I can guess.

To be honest, I don’t know why I hadn’t reviewed this sooner! I have reread you work CONSTANTLY yet for got about the review button! Oops? Anyway, I know I have already told you this but I’m going to put it here for EVERYBODY to see! You are amazing. Not just that, you have a gift. You work is truly phenomenal with the flowing river of words! The concept of this still takes away my breath and even though I don’t ship Jeffrens, I still can’t help to gawp and treasure this masterpiece of words! And trust me, that is a HUGE accomplishment! I usually really hate other fics that aren’t Lams (plz don’t kill me) but you my friend, YOU have completely flipped my perspective! I’m in LOVE with this! (If that is even the right phrase)! I adored the way it all flowed fluently with absolutely NO significant error even before I edited it! (I have just confused myself on that lol! What I’m trying to say is your work was already amazing before I edited it xDAnd even then... What was there to edit?! I was being way too picky!)

I really hope you either continue with this or at least continue writing!

P.S: Thanks for giving me a shout out! Warmed my heart x

-L.E-Raex_

Please keep making this story !

This is absolutely outstanding. I love the idea with the emotional/blood hearts, and how you wrote this is perfect. Your style is just amazing!

This is so good! I love the way you write! Keep on writing honey, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Hey, I'm just a random person scrolling through FanFiction with no actual intent of commenting on things... I'm usually just here to read. I've been on here for a while, maybe like four months? XD I think this might be my first comment ever. But I'm shocked that no one has commented to compliment on how amazing and well-written this story is. I've read a lot of FanFiction and Wattpad and AOOO and all that good stuff, so I can tell this will move me to tears someday... is this an angst story? It kinda seems like one. Anyways, great job! I love this! And when do you update? I want to know!