Reviews for Monsters on Earth
NeoScriptGenius12 chapter 1 . 6h
They just leave the rape victim there? These guys are terrible cops!
Firefox 2222 chapter 40 . 7/22
Hey MojaveMarshal, I'm the guy who came up with the idea of the 'zoo incident', German K-9 cu sith and werewolf girl saving the male hiker. I came up with the 'zoo incident' idea after remembering the time when myself, my older sister and her family visited the Tampa zoo in Florida two years ago. I even came up with a few ideas for a chapter involving the 'zoo incident' idea. It's your choice if you want to uses it. They're only suggestion and it your decision to uses them.

Zoo ideas...

1- A young zoologist in his mid or late twenties was currently checking on the zoo's main attraction, the Bengal White Tiger to see if the tiger was alright. The moment he entered the tiger's habitat, he was suddenly knocked down by a beautiful mamono girl that possessed the features of a white tiger. After being knocked to the ground, the tiger girl proclaims her love for him after being raised by the zoologist for so many years and takes him as her mate. The monsterization of a Bengal white tiger looks similar to the Jinko tiger girls of the Mist Continent.

2- A young zoo keeper in his mid twenties was sent out to feed the Arctic wolves in the winter habitat where the arctic animals are kept. But once he entered the Arctic wolves habitat, he was ambushed by a small pack of wolf type monster girls that uses to be the Arctic wolves before being transformed into mamono. The moment the new mamono wolf girls pinned the young zoo keeper down with their new powerful bodies, they immediately take him to their artificial cave in order to mate and conceive babies with their new husband.
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Here are a few ideas for your story. I hope you like them and they are only suggestions. It's your choice if you want to uses them or not.

Idea 1- A old Alaskan man in his late forties or early fifties was out hunting with his dogs in the snowy Alaskan woods and suddenly finds a young teenage cu sith mamono wondering the woods alone. While speaking with the pretty cu sith girl, he learned that her parents were killed when she was a little girl and has been wondering alone ever since. Feeling deeply sorry for the girl and having no children of his own, he decides to adopt the girl as his own daughter. Facts about the man, he's a former sled dog racer and owns several sled dogs at his home. Also, he's a former champion of the 'Iditarod Trail Sled Dog Race' and decides to train her as a sled dog racer like himself.

Idea 2- A young man in his late teens was being bullied in school because of him being gay. He was able to keep his emotions together, but he lost it after being rejected by his best friend/secret crush after he told him about his true feelings for him. After being rejected by his best friend, he packs up his clothes and belongings before running away in order to get away from all the pain. By the time he reached the next town, he rents a room at a local motel in order to rest. Unbeknownst to him, his motel room was thick with demonic energy from the last patrons who used the motel room. After a few days of being exposed to the demonic energy, the dark magic response to his desires by turning him into a Alp. By the time he or should I say she wakes up and looks into the mirror. She goes into a state of both shock and joy that he was a succubi now and decides to go back home to find his friend and show him his new monster girl body.

Idea 3- A famous and influential man in Hollywood decides to bring in beautiful mamono girls into the movie business in order to expand the cinema industry. Hiring monster girls like Inari, Elves, Succubuses, Vampires, Yuki-Onnas and Youkos. I think that the mamono would love to be on the silver screen and become famous actresses.

Idea 4- While preforming a routine mamono search in the famous Sherwood Forest in England, a squad of British soldiers unexpectedly discovered a large makeshift camp filled with mamono children. There were hundreds of different monster girls of various ages. The oldest of the kids being as old as sixteen. After speaking with the leader of the monster girl camp who turned out to be a human wizard in his late fifties, the British authorities learned that the parents of the mamono kids were all murdered by the soldiers and inquisitors of the 'Order of the Chief God' and the wizard took the children under his protection in order to prevent them from suffering the same fate as their parents. After learning their camp was surrounded, he used his magic to teleport both himself and the mamono orphans away in order to escape the Order's death squads. After appearing on Earth, they tried to lay low in case there were 'Order' troops around. But his fears were washed away when he learned that the teleportation spell that he used sent them to a dimension that possessed billions of humans and had technology that he and the children never seen before in their lives. Not to mention, the humans of this Earth realm are friendly towards the mamono as the British government provided them with food, water and shelter in the capital city of London.

If you can Mojave, do a P.O.V of one or two of the mamono orphans as they are discovered by the British soldiers and brought to the city of London.

Idea 5- write more lemon one shot stories. Here are a few examples...

* A young man of Irish descent was out drinking with his friends in his hometown of Boston suddenly encounters a sexy Red Oni girl at his favorite pub. After learning that Red Onis were known for their drinking, he foolishly challenges the Red Oni into a drinking contest in order to see who can drink the most before passing out. For hours, the two of them matched each other shot for shot as they drank themselves shit faced. Too everyone's shock, the Red Oni girl who were known by all as being masters of drinking large amounts of alcohol unexpectedly loses the drinking contest as she passes out from drinking over one hundred shots of pure whiskey. Once the Irish guy was crowned the winner, he immediately passes out right next to the Red Oni. By the time he wakes up the next morning, he suddenly finds himself in his apartment with the same Red Oni from last night sleeping soundly in his arms. Not only that, but both he and the Red Oni girl were naked while remembering vague memories about himself and the Red Oni having wild drunk sex in his bed.

* A young and beautiful Lizardman girl who managed to escape the town of Medford before being surrounded by the U.S military. Seeing that their mission to turn the town into a Demon Realm failed and their army wiped out, the young lizardman girl decides to take shelter in the thick forests of Oregon in order to evade capture. For many months, the Lizardman girl lived off the land as she ate wild animals and drank from the nearby rivers and streams. While hunting for her next meal, she unexpectedly ran into a young man who was out hunting deer with a bow and arrow. The moment she spotted him, the Lizardman girl immediately pulls out her sword before attacking the human man in order to either fight him off or capture him for spirit energy. Unbeknownst to her, the young man who she was currently fighting was a off duty U.S Recon Marine who had years of combat experience under his belt. After several minutes of fighting each other with their blades, the recon marine was able to defeat the Lizardman and forced her to surrender. After accepting defeat, she humbly begged the marine to accept her as his wife. After a night of passion in her camp, he gladly takes her to his country home as they start a family together.

Good luck with your story and please write more soon.
FENIX chapter 1 . 7/21
Another incredible chapter of this wonderful story, continue on that path Mojave
Guest chapter 4 . 7/21
I made a joke about the mge and all of its timeline was a fanfic. It went like this. OK ENOUGH WITH THE FUKIN LEMONS! WERE GONNA RUN OUT OF TEA AND SUGAR BEFORE WE EVEN USE HALF THE SUPPLY!
thotslayer chapter 40 . 7/21
why cant they make one to create male monster boys ,then everyone be happy
DRAGONDAVE45 chapter 40 . 7/22
Awesome! Behold the wonders of SCIENCE! I hope this will give Lilith something to think about when her husband informs her of this development.

Will we get some lemony updates on the rest of the established couples now? Including which ones accept the hope of CRISPR? And here's a twist, what if some of those couples, like Tuck and Mira Lamia, he has AB blood making him immune to Demonic Energy. This means that he is genuinely deeply in love with her, no Demonic Energy required! Plus, could Bob possibly be warming up to Sally Scylla by now?

I also really like a lot of the suggested lemon one-shots that have been suggested; especially the K-9 Unit cop who's German Shepherd partner turns into a cu sith, and the zoo incident. Also the werewolf girl that rescued a male hiker from a normal grizzly bear. And I thought of another: a teenage mucus toad, one of several young monster girls adopted by a childless human couple, has started high school and joined the school's swim and diving teams. All the boys are facinated by her, making a lot of the human girls jealous of her. But the boy who catches her eye is the kind-hearted nerd who is tutoring her.
FENIX chapter 40 . 7/19
The great Mojave never disappoints with its incredible chapters.
Guest chapter 40 . 7/19
honestly im still wondering what happened to the soldiers that were deployed at the mge world Unless I missed something the last part of us hearing them was when they were freed from...err...”slavery” for the lack of better word and then proceeded to turn their captivators into bits
BlueStone 90K chapter 40 . 7/19
What's up! I just read Ch. 40 and it's good. But I feel sorry for the husband of the Dark Elf chick. Don't get me wrong, I think their hot and stuff. But i'm not into that freaky S&M crap that they love to do with their 'husbands'. Anyway the chapter is good as the mamono on Earth will be able to give birth to males. Also it's good that the mamono are able to adapt to Earth society like getting jobs and going to school. Heck, maybe one day in the future, the president of the U.S or the prime minister of England would probably be a male mamono.

Here are a few ideas and tips that might help you with your future chapters.

Idea 1: The CEO of a major online retailer like Amazon or eBay came up with a brilliant idea of hiring harpies, honey bees, Hornets and other flying type monster girls as couriers. Delivering packages to people no matter the distance. I bet Amazon would love to hire harpies into their business as they need a better way to deliver their produces.

Idea 2: In the future when the mamono are able to give birth to male mamono and stuff, would the militaries of Earth try to recruit male mamonos into the military? Think about it. Imagine if the U.S or the N.A.T.O had divisions of male Ogres, Orcs, Minotaurs, Hellhounds, Lizardmen, Centaurs and Cyclops as shocktroops in battle. They would overpower any enemy force in their path with their mamono strength and stamina. Or better yet, elite special forces units comprised of male or female Werewolves, Vampires, Dragons and Kunoichi. It would be awesome if Black Ops units like S.A.S or S.E. had some werewolves or kunoichi in their ranks.

Idea 3: The owner of a struggling horse racing track decides to hire and train Centaurs in order to bring more people to the racetrack. He or she came up with the idea after watching a few young Centaur girls racing each other on the local news. Once the public learned that the racetrack was going to have Centaurs racing each other. Hundreds of people flock to the horse track in order to either place bets on the horse girls or simply watch them as they never seen a horse race where the horses are replaced with pretty Centaur girls.

Idea 4: Write a few more one-shot lemon stories...examples

* A young hiker from the U.S or Europe decides to go on a vacation to the Himalayas with his friends. While hiking down Mount Everest with his party, he suddenly gets lost in the wild because of a terrible blizzard. Just before he was about to die from hyperthermia, he's suddenly rescued by a beautiful Yeti girl who suddenly found him freezing to death. After warming him up with her warm body and fur, she takes him back to her home so he would be safe from the blizzard. After 24 hours of being stuck in the cave, both the hiker and the Yeti girl fell in love with each other as they became husband and wife.

* A young and beautiful Sea Bishop who was currently in the Caribbean Sea suddenly finds a young sailor drowning after his sail boat sank after a bad storm. With time running out for the sailor and no other sea mamono around, she quickly performs the ritual and remakes his body in order to save his life. After learning that she saved his life, the sailor falls in love with his new wife as they embrace each other in love.

* A young college kid in his early twenties was walking home after buying some food at a local grocery store. While walking down the streets of Boston or perhaps New York, he suddenly finds a cute Kobold girl trying to keep herself warm while snow or rain is falling down. After seeing the kobold in her state, he decides to take her home in order to take care of her. After a few months of living together, the two of them fall in love and start a family.

Good luck and please write more...
The Weary TimeLord chapter 40 . 7/21
Greetings,
Another great chapter, this is shaping up nicely so far.
Cheers,
The Weary TimeLord.
Imperial warlord chapter 40 . 7/20
Awesome chapter.
Dylancool890 chapter 40 . 7/19
let hood niggas join royal makai
Apostle-of-Darkness chapter 40 . 7/19
There were a few characters that you had introduced. My question is in regards to Bob Richards. Will we see him again? And if so, will he finally be rescued?
Miserum chapter 40 . 7/19
Ay yo what happened to my boy bob. Is he stuck forever getting clapped under da sea?
Long King-00721 chapter 39 . 7/7
They need to learn that abducting and semi-torturing an FBI agent and attempting to abduct earth soldiers will not be tolerated.
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