This wasn't too bad... You are sticking to the storyline while adding new stuff. I can dig it. I'm on the fence and before I fully judge this I will wait a few chapters. Beyond that I like the characters and can't wait to see what you do with them. That being said I want to see you make Heather into the straight man. For example make her point out how they are in the world of Disney while everyone else ignores it. I think it would make up for the general silliness the series is known for.

When Maleficent is killed and Alejandro looses his powers, you should have Cody leave him behind. Like in a realm filled with heartless, with no powers or way to command them, he’ll be helpless. Cause at least the others that are working for Maleficent have some redeeming qualities. Alejandro on the other hand shows no signs of redemption or changing. Sparing him and bringing him back to earth will only give him an excuse to cause trouble again.

It really a shame this story takes place after TR:WT. Cause I think Dawn, Ella, and Samey would make good additions to Cody’s upcoming harem.

With the exception of Miraculous Ladybug, the Wonderland chapter seems similar to TDDolphin’s chapter, including some of the dialogues. Now I’m NOT calling you out, as I know you said in chapter 1 that you want your story to be it’s own thing, it’s just that seeing identical scenarios in multiple stories tends to raise suspicion.

Also while I’m sure you plan on doing it as a steady reasonable pace, please don’t rush or force the romance for Cody’s harem.

I don’t know if it’s stated in the upcoming author notes, but please don’t add Sierra to the harem. Only the truly desperate, and lonely would want to be in a relationship with a crazed stalker, that has no respect for privacy and boundaries.

I say no, don’t make LeShawna part of the harem. Sure she was with Harold for a time, but I doubt she’d be into someone like Cody. You can have her be supportive to the harem, just not be in it.

Let's start with bad things:
-Long time waiting of course :C
-Chapter is slightly shorter then last 2/3 chapter and we waited so long for this one :C
Good things:
-Your writing improved!
-It was interesting chapter even if it was only introduction to the next point of Cody and Friends adventure
-It's finally uploaded!

See ya!

My hero academia and Senran Kagura
Deku x Harem
Halo and Jormungand
Noble Six x KoKo x Valmet

Wonder which one Hades will get and if Cody will unlock any more abilities. For the new girl, I would either go with Jasmine, Sky, Dawn, Zoey, Scarlette, Ellody, Dakota, Sanders, Kitty, Crimson, Carrie, Stephine, and Jen. These are just suggestions for the one girl not all of them. Wonder if Cody will figure out the key chain trick soon and what did that orb do to tinker bell? Keep up the good work.

have you hear kingdom hearts 3? also, i thinking adding girls is Frankie Stein, raven queen, stealf elf and Harley Quinn

Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz)

Whoa! This came out of nowhere! I'm glad to see you updated this story Harem :D Back to the Disney worlds now huh? Sweet! Gotta say Cody taking care of Tinkerbell is really sweet, and Gwen throwing her scythe at Phil for disturbing her nap was hilarious. I think I know who the Summon is that comes from that stone too, even though I've never played any of his games. But to keep it fun, I won't say who it is here ;)

Can't wait for Olympus Coliseum Part 2! I'm guessing Hades is gonna bring in either Heather or Geoff.

This ain't been updated in a bit please if you read this UPDATE this story is really good :3

Alejandro as a dragon, huh? That was unexpected. Good chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice chapter!
I'm little happy that this part of story ended (don't get me wrong it's not bad or something I just don't like Miraculous)
Alejandro is most powerfull? well like it's said Duncan can't control his powers and still he is one of strongest so I think he will be bigger run for money from our hero team :P
I really like this chapter
Hope to see next chapter faster :V