Excellent!

Ah yes, that warm fuzzy feeling of Dalton Whump! Thank you for this. It was great before, but you just made it awesome!

How come I mised this fic ? I've been chasing hurt!Adam fics lately and thought I read them all... Obviously I missed this one. I loved the relationship between Adam and McG. I'd love to read more fics with these two. And I loved how the team was all worried about Top. Good fic, thank you !

Love that added worry and comfort from the team! Thank you for adding it! It was great :)

I loved the addition! So much good worry, concern and angst by the team for Adam, it's wonderful! And I can't remember if this was in the first time around, but it really struck me this time, the moment when Preach declines Amir's offer to ride with Dalton. At first I was like, "Ok, I guess that makes sense," but then when it was because Preach didn't want Amir to be alone, it was just... amazing. Love the team dynamics! Thank you for this story!

Good ending.

Was a good story before and a GREAT story with the updates. Look forward to more stories from you!

Very nice extension of your story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

This story was GREAT! I really hope you right more.

Loved this one! Please write more and help get the word out to renew The Brave.

Loooooooooooove this! Yesssss. Love Dalton being awesome and pushing through the pain, love the whump, love the team's concern, love it all! I dearly hope you write more!

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Don’t get me wrong that episode was already good but your rewrite might have been even better !

Liked it?! I loved it! I’ve been waiting for someone to do something with that scene and man did you do it perfectly! This is so good I hope you write more (I mean not for this story but for the fandom)

This was awesome! Everyone was written totally in character! And most of all - I loved the Dalton whump - there is definitely not enough of some Dalton hurt going around! Hope to see more of this.

Thanks for this new whump!dalton. We need more of this in the fandom ;o)