| Reviews for Castlevania: Rite of Chaos |
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Jack54311 chapter 76 . 8/31/2019 Looks like Alexander has gained an apprentice in the power of Dominion. Cool. Will you do Bloodstained: Ritual of the Night in this story? |
Jack54311 chapter 75 . 6/26/2019 Hmm... it appears that we are reaching the final stage of this story. This should certainly prove interesting. Looking forward to it. |
Jack54311 chapter 74 . 5/13/2019 Oh man, I would love to know how they had managed to pull that off. Not to mention who married them. Walman, maybe? |
Jack54311 chapter 73 . 4/30/2019 Vincent seems to know of Alexander, huh? I'm curious about that now. Good chapter, although I got a little lost trying to follow along with the post Dracula conversation. That might be my fault though. |
Jack54311 chapter 72 . 4/8/2019 Dude... okay I know Alexander hasn't watched anime. So he knows Japanese? Regardless that was still hilarious. Nice touch. I wonder if Rusalka has or will develop a romantic relationship with Alphonso? I can kinda see that happening. Great chapter, it was fun to read. |
Jack54311 chapter 71 . 4/6/2019 Hmm... I wonder what he sensed? Good chapter, although it feels to me that the ending was a bit rushed. I may be wrong though. |
Jack54311 chapter 70 . 3/26/2019 Another good chapter. Poor Johnathan. Nice pun, though. I always love a good pun. Interesting touch, making that town Moythium. |
Jack54311 chapter 69 . 3/26/2019 Another interesting chapter. I was wondering if this would ever be updated. I really enjoy this story. I especially liked how Rusalka and the succubus, I think her name was Orvys? I like how they teamed up against the temptress. That was a nice touch. The explanation to Johnathan and Charlotte about what he is was nice, too. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Jack54311 chapter 68 . 1/17/2019 Ah, that was a nice touch with Medusa, letting her make use of the various forms he had acquired. Well played. The rivalry with Mino and the Dullahan was well done as well. It seems that they were able to shift it to a more friendly one there at the end. Nice touch. I enjoyed this chapter. I'm definitely looking forward to the next. What did he mean, indeed? I can almost picture Death aiding them in destroying Brauner lol. |
Jack54311 chapter 67 . 1/17/2019 Okay. It took me awhile, but now I've finally read through this. I like how the main character, Alexander, has the power of dominion, and is recruiting monsters through trust and loyalty. It's an interesting twist on Castlevania. He went from being an average man to a powerful mage capable of beating Death himself in every fight. I do have a few complaints though. On a minor note, is English your first language? You write like it isn't, but it's still well enough to read without difficulty. However, my real complaints are not that. First, you have shown several interesting characters or events that are almost, if not ever featured. You recruit Medusa, then she's only mentioned once. We never see her fight, and she's never interacted with. Lady Bat is only mentioned a couple of times. Where is him talking to her? He's supposed to be helping her, but so far she's just watching the world through him? And after he recruits that storm dragon, we never see or hear of it again. You also mentioned a rivalry between Minotaur and that armor (I forget the name). Yet it's never brought up again. Same for Rusalka and Orvys (I think that's the name for the succubus). I was actually looking forward to their rivalry. Blackmoore said they were in a rivalry over Alexander's undying love and affection. Yet we never see it. Why are you mentioning these things if you won't use them? My other complaint is a smaller one. You occasionally have Alexander go on these long winded speeches that... don't really make much sense. It isn't often, but there were a couple of times I was honestly confused as to what he was talking about. I don't remember the exact instances, however. Despite these complaints, however, I am interested in this story. I'll go ahead and follow it. It has proven to be a good read, all things considered. |
supboyyyyy93 chapter 41 . 10/27/2018 GOD, I LOVE THIS GAME! I WISH I STILL HAD CURSE OF DARKNESS DEFINITELY ONE OF THE BETTER CASTLEVANIA GAMES! It also seem that someone or something has enough power to seal the monsters inside alex to prevent him from using their power most likely his ancestor. |
supboyyyyy93 chapter 39 . 10/6/2018 the group is getting stronger by the second especially shanoa and sapphire and it looks like the group is also getting larger still. |
supboyyyyy93 chapter 36 . 9/7/2018 i didn't even know there was a Christopher belmont, i got to look him up and see which game he's from. i also see that kenmur has a new powerful weapon i can't wait to see him use it and im dying to see sapphire use her werecat abilities. |
supboyyyyy93 chapter 35 . 9/7/2018 wait so sapphire now joined them in traveling through time. if i remember correctly she that girl who turned into a werecat. lets see where they'll end up next. |
supboyyyyy93 chapter 33 . 9/1/2018 oh man, simon's warning sounds pretty serious.. i wonder what he means by it. speaking of simon, i thought he was all about the glory and testing his strength i would've thought he would dislike having people help him during his first journey rather than the second where he's dying from the wound he got by dracula. oh well, let's what going to happen next. |