Wohoo, my Oc has finally entered the story! Thank you so much~ You have done her justice, and I hope you will continue to do so, as well as with the story itself _

New servant get summoned, and the war spiralling into chaos.

for archer identity is either paris, odysseus from his episode with telemacus, or Aeneas but they are being genderbend.

i only know two archer at trojan war, maybe it was one of them.

What piqued my interest in this chapter is the creature that being summoned on the end of this chapter, is it a servant or a completly new being.

for me personally i think your writing style don't have any problem and i love the story with this kind of writing style,if ican say you're writing is in fact so structured, descriptive without lacking in detail, but if i can give you a suggestion i think think you need to make a longer chapter.

"If you can be inclined, may I have your true na-" "I'm tired, can I go take a nap Master?"

I already love Archer XD I can't wait for the next update!

Huzzah, good old Casval made it in here. That makes me happy. Good thing the Faustian magus has a good sense of patience. Looking forward to seeing the next installment.

Okay, this story is coming along nicely. We've gotten to see at least one Servant now, and I have to say, I find Archer hilarious, whoever she may be! Can't wait to see the other Masters and Servants! Keep up the good work!

And the war is starting! I have to say though, your writing style is super nice and I like it! Thanks for the update.

Anyways, we got a glimpse of two of the Masters in this Holy Grail War, Casval and Erika. I really love that these two have a totally different personality; Casval with his seriousness and formalities, while Erika is much more laid-back and carefree. And while Casval seems like he's from a wealthy Magus family, Erika is living alone (well with her fox-or foxes?) in an ordinary neighborhood.

But hey, we also got to see one of the Servants; Archer! I wonder if she's really 'one of the greatest warriors of Troy' like Casval said. I have a feeling that behind all that laziness she's actually serious when needed though. And the Servant from the last scene of this chapter was talking about fear, so I'd assume that they're Assassin.

Also, thank you so much for accepting Erika! I can definitely say that you're doing a great job portraying her so far, and I can't wait to see what kind of Servant she will get. And you're doing awesome with Hi and Fuu too! Again, thank you!

Alright, that's all from me. That was a great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

Well, I'd have to say I'm a fan of the Fate series, color me intrigued. Hope you don't mind if I try my hand at this.

This is quite the interesting story that you've come up with. I might as well throw my hat into the race then

Sounds interesting so far. Though I'm a little busy now, I'll try my best to send a Master for you!

Interesting, I'd like to try and hold a spot since I'm at work right now and don't get off for another several hours.

So the church also having a servant and it was a ruler class, interesting, also i doubted Matthew can stay neutral in fact no one can stay neutral on holy grail war .

So this Ruler's a jester huh? Nice. The servants are really interesting, especially with the risk and reward system as well as a bit into the servants personalities. I'll send in an OC for this (which may take a while).

Interesting servant system especially assassin, i will send my oc.