This is a great story. I wish you would continue with writing it.

U Should Add More Great Story

just found this story again and re-read it. I love it. It would be a nice surprise if you kept it going.

Please keep going with this story. Poor Callie has so many issues I hope Stef and Lena can get her to trust them.

I am loving this story! I cannot wait for an update!

Please update. Really enjoy this story

great story please update!

I couldn't stop reading this story. I'm so excited to see where this story goes. Can't wait to see callie and stefs connection more. Keep up the great work.

I absolutely LOVE this story! I just stayed up far too late reading the whole thing. This is such a good lens to look at the whole show again through, and I appreciate all the time and effort you’re clearly putting into writing. Thank you! I’m excited to see where this story goes.

Selling pills is wrong and if Mariana was anyone else's daughter she would have been expelled or suspended longer than a week. She needs a major consequence and not a simple slap on the wrist. If this had been B, he would have been a goner.

Hope Stef and Lena find out about Mariana being the one who really sold the pills. In the show, they slapped her wrist.

In my review to ch. 10 I forgot the not in front o mutuality. I meant a sittuation where Brandon develops feelings for Callie but does not for him.

I like the approach. But I think you should sometimes think about what the appropriate action of a police officer who takes their oath seriously would be.

Examples:

After the sittuation at Jim's house with Callie clearly being injured there is no way protocoll wouldn't force Stef and her fellow officers to send her to the hospital. Not only because she is a ward of the state but also to get medical evidence on record and to cover their own backs (that noone later files charges for them being negletent). Yes they driver to the hospital eventually but not on official record with an emergency transport.

Other example would be her hearing about the potential rape in a foster home. I understand that she knows being to pushy is not helpfull ith victims. But the suspiscion is strong enough that she more or less would have to fill a report and at the very last get that foster home blacklisted. Also even with Bill's "explenation" it seems to me stuff like putting blame on the potential victim by adding her as the iniiator to her file as well as the string of coincidential abuseive homes he tends to find really is worth a report on him which should lead to an audition (which likley would mean he won't be as happy to see Stef and Lena later on).

I hope you will deviate from the original plot at some point. But with your no Brallie promise we might not see Callie breaking the one rule that breaks any chance for adoption in this fic. Though it would be interesting to explore how Stef and Lena might handle if Brandon develops feeling for Callie that are mutuality. Because to some degree Brandon as bio Kid has power over Callie as not yet adopted foster kid. If he shows public affection, she gets send away while he won't. It doesn't even have to be malicious on his part because this might be something he is unaware but Callie very aware of.

On the whole great story so far like it a lot!

Amazing!

This is so good, love the detail!