Sorry for not leaving a constructive comment... but I just wanted to mention that I really like what you created here and that you should feel proud of this. Can't wait to read more!

love the sheet easpecialy how you make him mad because of humaliation

I have to wonder if Derickson used a catalyst or not, seeing as he and Assassin have diametrally opposed personalities. Or maybe, as Assassin pointed out, they fit perfectly with each other.

And I have to agree Tohsaka didn't do much so far, if anything. She only fought once, and only because she was attacked. Considering her personality, it's almost impressive.

i only hope someday you will make servant sheet for all the servant, so we can read more troughtly about their skill, history and noble phantasm.

I think I may have a good idea of Lancer's identity now. I had thought about this before, but I did not have nearly as many hints.

Shige really gives a strong Shirou vibe - what with the nigh-suicidal tendency of throwing himself in front of danger. But I feel he has yet to be finish his own arc, so I'm not too worried about him.

Something which I failed to mention last time, this war really is unnatural in more than one way. Rather, most Servants summoned have something strange about them. Berserker and Rider are Divine Spirits, which are supposedly unsummonable by the Fuyuki Grail. Caster has yet to reveal her idnetity, but something's clearly amiss with her. And Assassin (I guess it's Assassin?) feels more like some sort of epidemic than a regular Servants.

Even Archer only has 2% chance to win

There is nothing to complain about this story as it is pretty satisfying in my opinion. I usually review every chapter but my health has been pretty bad for some time now so i have become a silent reader with occasionally dropping reviews. Keep up this amazing work :)

If you ask me, the amount of comments is unrelated to the quality of the work. Most people will simply not raise their voices, and those who do are rarely making constructive observations. But, I guess I'm also guilty for not voicing myself for so long.

Simply put, there's nothing to complain about, even if we wanted to.

I don't know how much time you gave it, but you clearly planned that story ahead. That's visible in the pacing, which is smooth and consistent. Their are several point of views, but not so many that the story would be chaotic. Besides, most events here are connected, so the distribution of screen-time is not a problem.

For the rest, my opinion hasn't changed over time. The plot is intriguing, the characters get their development and I still can't figure out the Servant's identity for the love of me.

The bottom line is, I'm glad this OC Grail War has gone its way instead of ceasing. Good job.

Battle between masters always interesting

All three pov in one chapter ? Well i certainly wouldnt complain about that. Also did i mention how much i like the action in this fic, i absolutely love the way battles are paced. Cant wait to see the carnage berserker causes. See you next chapter :)

Collingwoods & Caster, who are they?

I wonder if the two good guy teams will ever work together anytime soon. Love the interactions between caster and collington. See you next chapter :)

sweet ending for this chapter

That cliffhanger was evil but i am sure that isao would not kill him. That was a pretty awesome chapter. I love the fight between the two servants as rider was really emotional and broke through caster's cool demeanour. I am looking forward to see what caster is up to. See you next chapter :)

I wonder if Isao would team up with them