| Reviews for The Seventh Swordsman |
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Hellwyrm chapter 3 . 9h I know this is an old chapter, but I have something to point out. "If he hasn't told you then it is not my place to disclose his past. ...*immediately proceeds to tell Ino Naruto's past.*" Did you have a sudden bout of amnesia after writing that first sentence? I get that English is your third language, but come on, it should effect your reasoning like that. You're a decent writer, but this and several nitpicks from your story Devil make me not want to read what you've written to completion. I'll give this one a little more time, but Devil lost me around chapter 57. |
KoroshinoTsuki chapter 5 . 7/21 I love it so far |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/20 It is pretty nice so far. Please update as soon as possible. |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/19 Finally a story that doesn’t follow cannon and is interesting. |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/17 Never post, but you have written some of my favorite fanfics. This story is developing awesome and you are killing it. Keep it up! |
Ky111 chapter 35 . 7/15 Awesome chapter as always. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Until the next one. |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/15 This is getting better and better |
aey-vee chapter 35 . 7/15 My God man! That battle scene is giving me goosebumps! I played legends never die in the background and Girei Pan's theme song after the conversation with the tailed beasts! So damn awsome! |
qalleesyawesome chapter 35 . 7/15 Man that was awesome.. The battle was soo exciting, i was at the edge of my seat reading and feeling so pump.. Next chapter would be the battle with mangetsu and the truth that will be revealed... And i really wanna read mei's reaction of almost killing naruto a little tender moment between them maybe.. Wow we're at the halfway mark already, it feels like just yesterday when i started reading this.. What a roller-coaster it has been and you said its gonna be another roller-coaster?! Well that just makes me more excited for the upcoming chapters.. Anyway great chapter, cant wait for more! So keep up the awesome work and stay happy and healthy! |
Mariusz1988 chapter 35 . 7/15 Hiruzen brought this upon himself and now he fears what he created. Bastard. I understand that from his POW Minato is becameing a threat. Who would Tobirama protect his son or his puppil(and in extension the village)? I'm curious. Good read. |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/14 Its amazing that this story has the same direction as take two round two by third fang with less chaos & crack |
Guest chapter 35 . 7/14 Another great chapter, absolutely amazing fight scene. I wonder what operation clean house will be and I hope naruto can stop it, if it’s bad. |
niningtantalus chapter 35 . 7/14 your story of naruro is the most interesting,cuz full of action bravo |
Archilles chapter 35 . 7/14 you're the best . thank you |
Xemenon chapter 35 . 7/14 Soo... Time for Uzus' destruction? |