Love this! Fantastic fic!

blood on the carpet? ha ha ha , that sounds like Eric when he killed the Were in Sookie's house on True Blood!

I love this story. However I would like to point out that in this chapter you started Bella was ready to feed in Seattle, however, I thought Peter and Charlotte took her back to Texas...nearly 1000 miles from Seattle

The story, I loved. The grammar/spelling, not as much. *winks*

With that said. WOW! I enjoyed the more uniqueness of this story. Very few have Bella being found by someone other than her mate and coming into her new life without said mate. However, the ones who found her made sense and, of course, her mate would end up being him (trying to not give so much away in the review. *winks*).

I enjoyed Bella's composure and control in the beginning, sure, she caught on and grasped what she needed to do quickly and with ease, but it wasn't without some missteps along the way, some learning went along with it. The door situation was extremely cute.

I'm saddened by Peter's permanent injuries though. :(
YIKES! Poor Esme! That's going to take some serious getting used to. I do wonder how they (Carlisle and she) will determine the best course of action to help her plight and ability to get around. So many various possibilities came to mind when her loss was revealed. Time in their island may be the perfect thing for the two of them. Maybe even Carlisle will learn to be content in just being with his mate.

I'm happy Emmett and Rose found their niche.

It seemed to take an eternity to get there, but I'm so happy Jasper and Bella found their way as well. :D

Thank you for writing and sharing.

Wonderful story. Love it! Thanks for sharing

Really good story!

Great story

Sweet ending

I'm enjoying your story. Wouldn't it be cool if Bella completely splits into three distinct people? One is Edward's mate, needy, never going undercover again. Two is Garret's mate, dark, willing to kill, danger magnet. They become a take-down team all danger and dark sex. Three is Jasper's mate, good-hearted, loving, kind. She and I asked become a camp couple and computer experts running a safe recovery place. Each husband would have specific time where their Bella would function. Anyway, the only suggestion I have is to tighten your locations. Sometimes it's not clear where they are. Can't be on the East coast and still be in Washington or California.

Thanks for sharing.

Very enjoyable read thanks for sharing.

So I try to write reviews every now & again (tbh I'm a little intimidated by this box... What do I say? Who really cares? Etc.) but after getting through this whole story I knew I wanted to tell you just how much I truly enjoyed it. I love when I find a good fic & it's written well enough that I not only "see" it in my head, I can actually confuse parts of it as canon. This was an incredible read from start to finish, a unique twist on so many things & just plain enjoyable! I really thank you for sharing this... It's now one of my favourites. I look forward to reading more of you.

I loved this story. I really suck at reviews but this story was phenomenal and I'm sad to see it end.

Awesome I like alot

And, that's a wrap!

Congratulations, a story well written. So happy to be along for the ride!

CentauRita, NorCal Gal. ***waves***