| Reviews for A Ghost Of a Chance! The Ghost Queen's slaughter! |
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Gdog90 chapter 14 . 8/9 Dang... Out of the frying pan and into the fire! Enough said... Well, nice to know Rose may have some reason to trust the younger version of her mom now, and given that Desiree has revealed she pieced everything together, maybe they can finally get some semblance of a family-bond. And speaking of family, uh-oh! Still, if Danny and Desiree eventually reveal themselves, maybe they can calm these foes down. Also, I like how you referenced Thorn’s anime-inspired costume. I can’t wait for the next chapter. |
NeonPartyDude chapter 14 . 8/7 Well this was one wild ride and I can tell Danny ain't going to like all the clones of him either... |
The Book of Eli chapter 13 . 3/27 Oh man things are going wild and even though it's short this is really wild... |
Gdog90 chapter 13 . 3/20 Excellent chapter. That escalated quickly. It seemed like the Fenton/Phantom family showed some intensity. Rose just tapped into that little power right there. Dark Rider had to completely incapacitate her to make her stop. Dani... I take it you’ve seen Butch Hartman’s 10 Years Later videos. Am I right? At the risk of potential spoilers, I just love how he emphasized that while she isn’t evil, she’s definitely the scary-cop to Danny’s good-cop. Anyway, I think you captured that pretty well. Reaper was pretty awesome, too, especially in a mech-suit. And once Beast is unleashed... well, I can imagine a Mr. and Mrs. Incredible moment. Yeah, seeing her darkened, ghostly grandparents having a moment will probably scar Rose. X) And speaking of unleashed beasts, Danny seems to leaning towards a questionable path. Let’s see where that goes. Desiree’s got a viable plan. Nice. As they search, maybe Danny can also search for another jeweled item. *Wiggles eyebrows* The only minor-issue I have is how the paragraphs are formed. Is it possible that you could start a new one whenever someone new speaks? I was a little confused as to who was saying what at times. I can’t wait for the next chapter. |
Dragonrule chapter 1 . 3/19 Who is in that image from Butch Hartman and where can you find it? |
I luvgrace420 chapter 1 . 2/19 wow great story I like the part where he falls on his face from bed lol |
Fan Fan 92555 chapter 12 . 2/19 LOL my friend Ben10Extreme messaged me about your facebook link... LOL its such a stupid idea, no wonder everyone on the forums has been talking trash about you behind your back! |
The Book of Eli chapter 12 . 12/26/2019 We get a look at the future and at how Danny is holding up... |
The Book of Eli chapter 11 . 8/13/2019 This is going to be a very painful lesson and yeah more father daughter bonding... |
MeteorElDrago chapter 11 . 8/10/2019 Hmm interesting chapter with Skulker and Valerie teaming up so keep it up and can't wait for the next update. |
The Book of Eli chapter 10 . 3/26/2019 Alternate time lines as well as new stories pretty big news but can't wait... |
Daniel6 chapter 10 . 3/24/2019 Ben 10? Sweet! |
The Book of Eli chapter 9 . 2/20/2019 Looks liek youn Desiree is ready to change her future and i honestly want to see Danny and Des grow up happy with each other... |
Guest chapter 9 . 2/18/2019 Great chapter. I just knew there was more going on than Clockwork let on. Cool, Dani’s back! Although I do wonder if she’s going to stay like this. Clockwork said he rewound her. Does that imply her death is still going to play out? So that’s who Vivienne is. I think I get it: when Vlad released Pariah, he released her as well. However, she stuck to the shadows (no pun intended) until well after her husband was resealed. Now she’s carrying out her plans again in the form of someone with strong-potential, but far-weaker will. Actually, now that I think about it, past-Desiree seems to already be displaying stronger willpower, having overcome her inability to resist granting every wish she hears. Oh, just to let you know, there’s a run-on sentence near the beginning of this chapter (when Desiree and Danny are having a moment). Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 8 . 1/23/2019 Another great chapter. Nice to see that the Fright Knight’s out of commission. And there’s enough of Maddie in Reaper to reunite her with the family. Jack/Beast... I guess they’ll cross that bridge when they get there. I’m liking the family-dynamics. You can already tell that there’s hope for the Fentons. In the case of Danny and Desiree, love or anger, their child is making them stronger. And Queen Desiree has no idea that her past-self wasn’t sealed away. And that gives them an advantage. I can’t wait for the next chapter. |