Fluffy and cute, a grade A moment :D

How sweet, I love how concerned everyone was about Jaune and I love Yang and Jayne's talk. It's the first time I saw them talk so deeply and they do make wonderful friends. Jaune and Yang are great characters and Yangs positive and care free outlook on life really was shown well and was exactly what Jaune needed to hear. Really well done, thank you!

How have I not found you until now?

Nice.

This is an incredibly written oneshot. I don't know what your future writing plans are, but you should consider making this into a full fledged story focused upon Jaune of course. There are very few Jaune centered stories that go past volume 3 and are well written. This has the potential to become a fantastic story for many others to enjoy.

More?

This is a good read. I do feel like the end and or last half could have been stretched out a bit more in the progression from the Jaune at the beginning to the one at the end but it’s still a good read. Good job.

I don't believe you when you say it's a rushed job, because i have seen worse stories that had months and they could not compare to this.
I hope hope i get to read a story that you consider a well written one.

If this was a hastily written story then something with more time would be great to read.

Anyways, good read! I honestly hope we get SOMETHING like this in the show itself. The reunion with the characters was nice and all but it seems like the multiple elephants in the room are being ignored.

MORE PLEASE!

If this is a rush job, then you are legitimately the most talented writer I have ever seen