More Please I Beg Of Thee

Pretty good chapter, but i still hope John/Natsu will meet some opponent capable of give him an hard time. I'm also going to check your novel. Keep up the good work and see you later.

Non bad chapter, but if i was in John i would simply train better Naruto and Sakura (and i hope she will be a good teammate and Fighter here). Keep up the good work and see you later.

Poor Kira, trapped in this nightmare. I wish the best of luck for her.

P.s. i advice you the story ' Elemental nation online', of my friend Kelvin King. He also write on royalroad.

Ok, the elemental nations are doomed. And (sadly) harem is ensured.

John's 'breeding programs' is a little weird, but i agree about his plan for utopia. Humanity always find a way for go into war...the best would be a world like Toriko, with countless powerful beast thath can endanger us, but still are a great source and food and materials. Plus, adding a lot of tournaument. This could be the best for keep at bay the almost self destructive istint of humanity.

Not bad chapter, but Danzo wasn't killed, or at lest denounced, by Saya? And i doubt Naruto would go into a raging kill, Minato wasn't a stupid and his seal keep Kurama's istinct at bay, plus in thath case even Hiruzen, who considered him a grandson, would cage him.

It’s a pretty good parody fic hopefully you don’t abandon it

Ok, sorry, bt honestly this chapter is s turn off. Kira also reborn seems too much(but i like her bond with Natsu) and the part at the academy is rushed. And most on all, ad much powerful Natsu is, i highly doubt he would show like this these abilities. Most on all if Pain and già comrades have an due on Konoha.

Fuck?

...that shit chunin should have died in the first punch...and wasn't he electrocuted...

Not bad chapter at all, i'm curious to see how Natsu will mess with the Uchica's life. But exactly where he came from? He was a boy from our world reincarnated in another fantasy world, and then ended into Naruto's verse or whath? Aniway, same advices of last time,(please, there's already too much of thath craps into the fandom), keep up the good work and see you later.

P.s. 2 things about this new family:1) Shaouri was alredy the father of Saya's first baby?2) Maybe it's better if you write Saya is Fugaku's younger sister of the daughter of his older sibling. Unless she's a teenager mom, this would make him too old(personal opinion).

not bad chapter and is promising for next fights, i'm very curious to see whath will happen now. Same advices of last time, keep up the good work and see you later.

Very weird and i some way a little awful(most on all breastfeeding), but promising, i just hope this guy will have a lot of hard times(or create opponents capable of give him such) and won't have a stupid harem.