Reviews for Pirate Assassins |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/16 I'd love to how this turns out |
non of ur business sorry chapter 1 . 12/25/2018 When will u update? |
Jaden Davenport chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 Please continue with the story I want to know what happens next |
Sagarel D. Vile chapter 1 . 6/13/2018 Let's just hope that none of the Straw Hats die. Lol |
gruntsbreeder chapter 1 . 2/21/2018 Good chapter interesting story can't wait for the next one |
SilversHaki chapter 1 . 12/24/2017 got damn! Deaths in One Piece ?! I hope you continue this fanfic! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2017 Nice so fair are you doing pairing |
TurboKid96 chapter 1 . 12/7/2017 I can't WAIT to see the rest of the story. And I can only imagine the failed attempts Sanji is gonna make at Leone; boy I can't wait to see that. Wait, if we're starting at the Baratie arc, does that mean that Night Raid is gonna have a part to play in the Arlong Park Arc? Also, I wonder how they're gonna react when they find out that Luffy is the son of Dragon. Also, does this version Night Raid work for the same Revolutionary Army run by Dragon? |
Kenpachi Zoro chapter 1 . 12/6/2017 Great concept but I'm wondering why you had the first person they come to kill be Don Krieg. It's basically universally accepted that he isn't a big deal and would've just been destroyed anyways so killing him that way makes no sense. And Why have damn near all of them there in order to kill him which as seen took a single slice to do. I'm thinking night raid probably should've been introduced during the Alabaster arc instead because it just doesn't make sense to have them be introduced anytime before that especially the the east blue due to it being considered the weakest sea. I'll keep reading to see what you have in store I just don't get why you chose to introduce them here. |
Revan the Edgelord chapter 1 . 12/6/2017 Interesting I'll have to keep an eye out for the next update |