Great story love the characters and the setting,one problem is that there is somewhat incorrect use of grammar. Also where is chapter 2?

all these story plots are really good. you should turn them into real stories.

Wow, these one shots are really good! I keep finding myself re-reading them over and over again :O are you still up for requests on making them full stories? :3 because I would personally love it if you made the first and the fifth one full blown stories . those two are my favorites so far from what you've written in this book :D keep writing great stuff like these! :

There are grammar mistakes, yes. However, when one looks past the critical analysis and focuses on the stories and their plots, a lot of interesting ideas and quirks are presented by the writer. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job.

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to the deal.

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Sounds good