Reviews for A Gathering Light
kaleik1 chapter 3 . 1/6/2018
So good! Jax and tara love so passionately!More would be appreciated
Ang R chapter 3 . 1/1/2018
I'm sad it's over, really liked this. You're very good at writing the intimate moments between Jax & Tara, & I don't just mean intimate as something sexual. You're good at showing the connection & trust between them. I like how must Tara trusts Jax & vice versa.
tellmesweetlittlelies chapter 3 . 12/31/2017
Well this was a nice NYE treat :) Looking forward to your next stories, I'm interested in something longer!
xbeautifulsaddnessx chapter 3 . 12/31/2017
Omg! That was so hot! Beyond well written, I can't wait for your next story! Happy New Year!
kaleik1 chapter 2 . 12/25/2017
Live this one shot! Jax and Tara so awesome
xbeautifulsaddnessx chapter 2 . 12/9/2017
Love how u manged to get playful yet sexy! Great job! Keep them coming :)
tellmesweetlittlelies chapter 2 . 12/9/2017
Very hotMy favorite part, though, is that you had Tara sort of uncertain, even admitting to herself at one point that this wasn't like her. People do out of character things all the time, but they're often aware that it's outside their comfort zone, so I like that you wrote her realizing that. Come back soon!
Ang R chapter 2 . 12/9/2017
I like that Jax could tell that she's losing her nerve, & complements her to encourage her on. I like how you pointed out that she finds Jax to be the beautiful one in their relationship, & that she lacks a bit of self confidence in these intimate moments. I love her effort to try to stay in character & the one liners she gave Jax, gave me a little laugh. I love him tucking her hair behind her ear, so sweet.

My only critique is that I wished it was longer, & that the next chapter was not the last!
Ang R chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
I really like this, I like the image of him reading to her, her observing him while he read. I was surprised st the end that she was going to give him a show.
xbeautifulsaddnessx chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
Great start! Love how peaceful them see reading and just enjoying each other's company. Can't wait for ur updates!
tellmesweetlittlelies chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
Great start! I love little moments like these when we see what they were "off-camera", so to speak. Just the every day alone time I wish we'd seen more of on the show.