I think I will develop diabetes because of the sweetness of this duo and this story

This was wonderful! AHAHAHA! Damn I bet they felt dumb. OMG that twsist!

i wonder what happened in the epilogue...

I have been waiting for your epilogue for this story and i just wanted to say that i really like your stoty

Such an amazing story! So sweet, amazing writing. A. Epilogue would be amazing or even more chapters, but will enjoy rereading this as is and appreciate it every time

Ohh this story was soo sweet... Plzzz post the epilogue soon ...

Oh, it's so beautiful!

Just so you know, I LOVE THIS SO DAMN MUCH!

ÖMG I am in love with that story because its fantastic.

I absolutely loved this story! It was so sweet

This was such a beautiful story! I loved it from start to finish. My only complaint is that it's over! haha I would gladly read a 200 page novel about this. The scene where Itachi wakes up and Sakura runs away is such a Sakura thing to do, and I loved how Naruto was the one to sort of sum up everything. It made me smile.

I really just can't get over how sweet this was. It's been about 15 minutes since I finished reading but my heart still feels warm from it. Awesome, awesome job. This is actually the first ItaSaku story I've ever read, and I can honestly say I ship this pairing because of you.

OH. MY. GOD.

I had to sit here with my head in my hands trying to remind myself to breathe for a few minutes before I could comment. This is a masterpiece of a story, and of a chapter. The gradual rising action and tension is so flawless I'm sure there's an equation to plot the slope.

And, I know I've said this before in previous reviews, but I am yet again amazed by the way you strike the balance between exposition and plot. This soulmates concept is a very complicated one that requires a fair bit of explanation. However, you don't crush us with a wall of world-building text. You give us the exact morsels we need at the exact time to create a story that is rich but not bloating. Honestly, you are so talented.

Also, I love your version of Sasuke and how warm he is. This is the Sasuke that could have been, and I enjoy watching how everyone is basically one big family.

"If you are not my destiny, you are most definitely my choice" is such a very beautiful line. My heart skipped a beat when I read it.

And when I reached the end of the chapter, my heart stopped. This is a masterpiece of a chapter. Brilliantly done.

Oh WOW. This story has wrapped itself around me and I am utterly caught up in it. I love your take on Itachi, and you portray his longing so well that I feel it as if it were my own.

I am so gutted that they are not soulmates, and I'm hoping that somehow it will change. I can't wait to see how Itachi proceeds with this covert courting, and curious to see how long they can keep it up before someone catches them.

Okay, I absolutely loved this chapter.

One of the main things that sticks out to me is the skillful way you portray Sakura's emotions. I had completely forgotten what it felt like to pine for someone like this, and you have captured those feelings flawlessly. I think you do a brilliant job of making the reader step into the characters' shoes.

The other thing that i *love* about your writing style is that you don't dole out explanations to the reader all at once like a boring bowl of porridge. You sprinkle knowledge about the world, its facets, and the characters throughout the narrative like a spice, and it gives the story a very natural, easy flow and makes me hungry for more.

I really love the concept of this story and am excited to read the next chapter!

Damm wow.. the angsty part made me cry like hell. itachi's reaction to sakura not being his soulmate, infront of his mother was so powerful.
And the way things turned out.. in regards to everyone.. sasuke.. ino.. hanabi.. Naruto.. sakura n Itachi too, ofcourse, was too good. I don't know how could I have missed this. This beautiful piece of art. Truly.

You madee safe.. you made me cry.. you made me feel like I am in love.. you made me feel sibling love (dango for Itachi by sasuke).. youade me feel excited.. terrified.. anxious.. IN LOVE!. Haha... Awesome! :D

Thanks for the wonderful work. :D truly! :D