What an imagination you have! To turn amiable Bingley and affable Colonel Fitzwilliam into murderers! Amazing! Thanks for sharing this enjoyable and different story.

I am finishing going around your stories and making sur so have read them all.
I like that this one is longer. The title is well chosen and the warning regarding a couple of characters going outside of canon.
But I really enjoyed it. Thank you very much. Darcy while clueless regarding Elisabeth’s opinion of himself is still quite aware of her personality and what she might appreciate.
Thank you

Hahahaha! Hahaha! Delightful!

I enjoyed this story.

I like that you redeemed the Bingley sisters. Even WIckham and Bingley got off lightly. I don't think you specify who Jane eventually marries. The adventures of Jane and Caroline in the Season would be an interesting follow up to this story.

Thanks for sharing.

Interesting. I have not seen a first night handled that way. Frightened Elizabeth arguing for her own deflowering with a sensitively reluctant Darcy.

Liking the set up.

Great fic, i love it, very different

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Another good history.
I don’t like so much the solution for the bad people, but some bad inside my self like when the so good and dulled characters (like Jane or Bingley) don’t have a happy end (I know, I am in shame of myselfbut I always have same dudgeon with Bingley regrading his attitude in the Assembly and Col because his in Hustford.

But I liked the no so happy but ok end of Caroline, she is not my favorite character but I can like her in some fanfictions.

Thank you again for share your work.

Hummm... thanks God this Jane has not a psycho disease like the original- she has some brain and some feelings, although no good ones.

One the thinks that I really love in your histories is although Elizabeth’s it’s the same silly, pride, Prejudice and stubbornness person in general have some people to put some light in her head. I always like more a 2nd part/version Elizabeth than the 1fr one.

Let’s see how this Darcy will react- I hope not in a jerk way, I also like the smart and generous Darcy than the pride and jerk one: yes, I also like your Darcy in the histories.

I know that I am start to flatter you but I could not avoid this: I love P&P, one of the best book ever, but it’s not without flaws, may be because it’s so modern and so realistic that we can worry and care so much about the characters; and when I can find your version of then so funny, realistic but more wise its impossible don’t be in love with them also.

Thank so much for your work and I hope don’t be offensive thankless for my prayers for a more complete and extended version of your histories, here or in Amazon..

Good look and all the successful for you.

This story is fabulous! I found it because I saw a post with the French Translation and scanned through your archives. Somehow you have managed treachery and wedded bliss in a way that is concise, surprising, not overdone, delightful and innovative. I love the turn of Miss Bingley as not so bad and Mr Bingley as horrible, and seeing the colonel as a villain as well— not often done! I love Lady C’s small part in this, and that Bingley and Wickham end up in business in the Americas is also quite fun. You even have a fresh take on Lizzy climbing trees theme. (Which is fun rather than “oh no, again?” As I feel when some authors use it.) What more could I ask?

That's what changes us ! the two nicest ones, Bingley and the Colonel become the bad guys, I like this twist of the story

A very good departure from the normal story line and characterizations. Thanks for writing.

The victims all benefited so hopefully are grateful. So beautifully written; better English than any stories I have read by other authors, thank you.

Getting it over with/breaking the ice is a very good plan