Loved it

Great read.

Since when is Carter not good with computers?

Loved your story with just one detail that was not true to the Stargate 1 universe. Samantha Carter worked on the computer systems that make the Stargate operational from her time at the Pentagon before she joined Stargate Command. So her expertise with computers is unmatched. But I guess you wanted something for McGee to do during the defense of SGC so I understand the discrepancy.

Delightful tale

So, I missed it. Who had the snake in him?

Sorry but the Story and all where for me off, when Carter say she is not good with computers...? I mean wtf the woman that build the most from the Stargate computers and the x-301-305... a Genius andere not good with Computers? Let her she say she need a second pair hands or so for McGees part, but make she to a stupid blondes? Sorry the writing is good but what Carter, Teal’c and some parts O’Neill characters are... it is very sad because the writing from the story was so good

interesting

A great story.

Sorry, but have you ever seen Stargate? There are many things off with the story. The equiptment is so old because the show is so old (relatively speaking) and Carter no good with computers?!

Awesome story!

Delightful tale.

Loved the story, loved the interactions between the teams and how Tony, Gibbs and McGee stepped up big time...especially Tony. Thanks for sharing...on to the sequel.

Just found this and read it from beginning to end. This was pretty good. Really enjoyed it.

a very interesting crossover :)