Ok, now for a real review. You managed to keep Gohan’s character true to the canon as well as his power while managing to make the scenes fun and interesting to read. A lot of authors “nerf” characters just to try to make fight scenes interesting and while I can bear that, it just ruins it a bit for me. So thank you for not doing that with this story. I do hope Gohan manages to make more friends though and that some people would warm up to him more.

Actually, nvm

This story is better in some ways as well. If you want to just do this story, that’s fine too.

Hello, this isn’t exactly for this story but, will you be back to update “Mirai Shinobi: Parabellum”? A lot of readers are waiting for its return. It’s a great story!

Nice chapter;))))))

Good story. Feels more authentic then many others I've read. Looking forward to the next chapter.

please update devil of the league

Please update Mirai Shinobi,it's been five months ...

I really like where the story is going. Gohan being a powerful individual who could probably defeat the toughest villains of Naruto is awesome. Keep going the nice work on that.
The only thing that bothers me is the eventuality that the shinobi learns ki abilties. I personnaly don't think that they DESERVE that. You even mentionned that Hiruzen hoped to find a way for Gohan to indirectly teach ki abilities to the shinobi forces. Even he realized that most of the village is loathing Gohan with the exception of Naruto. You see that many shinobi and clans completely disregard Gohan well-being but they selfishely believe that he will teach them is powers. Like " I want him in my clan to learn his abilities!" or "I hate him but I'm sure he will be willing to teach me his abilities". Chakra was initially used as a force of good, to be used wisely and honorably. With time, shinobi turned it into a mean for war who can be dangerous and destructive. Ki should not be used like that.
Once again, most people of Konoha are mean towards Gohan. I'm sorry, but Kurenai is acting like a bitch towards him. Kiba openly mock him (I won't be surprised if he eventually became racist with him) and Shino barely aknowledged his presence when Gohan greeted him, which is rude. Hiashi and Danzo clearly want to use him for their goals. Damn, I can only wonder how Sasuke will react when he'll see someone stronger than him who isn't even a shinobi. So, with the exceptions of a few people, Konoha does not deserve to learn Ki abilities. Gohan is already doing a much effective job than most shinobi anyway while is not even a shinobi. People should not be mad at him for not joining a military organization. Gohan as no loyalty to Konoha and that is just fine. He will fight to protect innocent people and his friends but he will not serve or be restrained by Konoha for not doing what is right by him. So fuck you Konoha, I will help those in need of help while I have the power to do so.
Anyway, now the Chunin exams will soon start! And that means that Gohan will soon meet Naruto again but alongside Team 7 and Konohamaru squad! He will also meet Suna team with Gaara, Temari and Kankuro. Gaara will probably want to kill him, Temari will crush on him and Kankruro will loath him. In other words, an interesting first meeting.
See you next chapter!

great story

Nicely done. You maintained things normally and made some changes to the cannon even by a little.

However one thing is both concerning and bothering.

Case in point the Naruto characters learning Ki. The reason is that it feels as if your setting them up to be threat to Gohan (and Trunks when he shows up) like so many other stories (seriously nerfing a poweful character from DBZ is both lazy and stupid unless your using a human character like Roshi for example which would make more sense than a nonhuman). I can understand Hinata since Gohan gave her abit of his energy and maybe Hanabi (but then again when never really know what age she was when she trained in using chakra) but if you have every other characters suddenly know how to eadily use Ki then "somehow be stronger than Gohan despite then being human" then your story is gonna be seen as another nerfing of a saiyan story (which is sadly alot). Also, it is already bad enough that Madara was OP and too perfect with no weakness so there is no way in hell that he suddenly knows Ki without any stupid BS.

Let me tell you something CHAKRA users can not use KI. AND Vice Versa.. the most they can do is apply fundamentals and use their Energy in more Creative ways.

Woot! What a show! I missed this, hehehe. I like the turn out, very pleasing, I gives it a ten out of ten!

I do wonder what will come of Hanabi learning Ki, could be fun, but that's for us to find out next time. Until then, Stay Awesome!

WHY WOULD NO ONE LIKE THIS IT IS AMAZING I LOVE THE OP GOHAN AND HIM NOT WANTING TO BE A SHINOBI 0..o I also hope that he has that technique that lets him heal mortal wounds like dende could. (I HOPE YOU DON'T MAKE A WIRED ENEMY THAT MAKES GOHAN HAVE TO ACTUALLY TRY 3 ) I cant wait to read more of this man! (also love the part where he gave some of his ki (like nothing, like 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000.1% of his ki to Ko and he was like 150%

I enjoyed this chapter immensly and hope too see more frequent updates

Awesome chapter! Looking forward to next time!