Reviews for A Story of Domination
sugoijack9 chapter 8 . 4/1
Now Humanity rule the Milky Way galaxy!
sugoijack9 chapter 7 . 4/1
This is getting stupid and its proving the point that this Shepard is incompetent.
sugoijack9 chapter 5 . 3/31
The Reapers began to fear their own demise.
It is time after all they faced annihilation to what they did to countless civilization they incinerated.
Time for Humanity to rule the Universe!
sugoijack9 chapter 4 . 3/30
One would think that the one arrogant about it is this Reaper displaying such arrogance compared to the Humans.
sugoijack9 chapter 2 . 3/30
Eeeeh Star Wars is here?
It not impossible considering were dealing the wider Universe and with the discovery of some galaxies containing their own 'Reapers'.
I thought so as well that the Force in Star Wars might be limited only in the Star Wars home galaxy.
sugoijack9 chapter 1 . 3/30
Given humanity 50,000 years to advanced, we would reached godlike qualities.
Andile chapter 1 . 2/26
Talk about overpowered(op) me likey lol
LeopardGecko01 chapter 9 . 1/25
i dont know whats up with these comments, but i really like the idea of humans being older (and stronger) than the rest.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2019
Hk
stylo1 chapter 9 . 12/19/2019
i truly dont understand a lot of your stort. you claim to have made the reapers more scary but the way you did this was give them numbers more advanced tech and being more tenacious. i really only agree wih the numbers as in canon they grew ships from harvested spieces not shipyards
reapers are an AI following a command this is not to explore better tech, as such no matter how long they live the will only advance by what they find.
their tenacity was never questioned in the me games cause they were never challenged. i do agree they are likely quick to counter teleporting tech but here comes my biggest issue with the story: humans react instead of being proactive. the reapers were in dark space they could have been dropping mass relays on their heads without destroying he galaxy for a long time now. or simply teleport all reapers into the black hole at the center of milkyway. or create their own black hole if they can controll it. maybe make a mass effect jammer and place it allong their route which interupts their ftl tearing ships appart the moment they pass through. they couldve taken the new species before their space flight and relocated them off the relay grid giving themselfs another 50k years or the chance to ambush the reapers while they are in system

as you can see they couldve done a lot of shit but simply didnt thus giving the reapers a chance to adept, and if an AI is good at one thing its solving a probem and adepting.
as you can see most or my points would invalidate your story and as much as i like it you really dropped the ball there
Kai Sycaryen chapter 9 . 11/13/2019
Wow great story, you should totally do sequels. Like one of Shepard’s descendants being an enforcer going back to the Star Trek galaxy or something... Anyway thanks for putting in the effort.
commisar chapter 9 . 11/10/2019
ENDING THIS IS HERESY! *BLAM!*
usjsjs chapter 9 . 11/10/2019
wife? Shepard is a lesbian?
toaster lover chapter 8 . 11/10/2019
yes do they have the archeotech the holy toaster we the mechanicus would love to put our cyber songs inside such beautiful and glorious machine
toaster lover chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
AHH by the ommisiah that Shepard female the ommisiah walk among us the ommisiah is Back!
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