Reviews for Iron Forces
Karazik chapter 1 . 8h
Ugh asshat renaned the story, i was hoping for something new the I stumbled on this story but its the same old garbage
SappySoulTaker chapter 6 . 8/2
In my head cannon, bounty hunting is something that operates almost entirely outside the law, or at best toeing the line. Like if you kill a bounty on Corusant, you are still liable to get arrested and charged with murder if caught. that said you wouldn't get turned in by the guild afterwards and the authorities might turn a blind eye depending on your target. on a world like Nar Shadaa, you live and die by your own strength and bounty hunting/evading capture is no different.
Watermelonninja chapter 1 . 7/29
Hmm? Wtf? Didn't Tony die tho? Did doctor strange reverse time to bring him back to life?
Strider-SilverFang chapter 27 . 7/28
my brain hurts from reading that. there were times I thought I understood what it was supposed to be. I've never(untill this moment) seen or read anything that so personifies the saying "there is something Lost in Translation"
Andromedanaea chapter 27 . 7/26
I found this chapter incomprehensible!
Andromedanaea chapter 19 . 7/26
The amazing powers of Vibranium were greatly increased in recent years. But Wakanda had advanced tech going back to the 1960s, when the country was first created.

There are some metals in bio-molecules. The iron atom at the heart of Haemoglobin that gives blood its' red colour is the most well know example.
Andromedanaea chapter 15 . 7/25
There are some collages that teach chemistry courses in an excelerated programs, where you don't actually learn the material, but you DO fulfil the requirement so you can get your non-chemistry degree. Perhaps a college near you does that?
Also, I hated General Chemistry. Too much algebra. I was finished with it and Physics before I discovered that there are calculators that have all those stupid formulas you have to memorise already in them. Also, the Universal Gas equation and how all those other are derived from it will save to from having to memorise each possible derived formula.
Organic Chemistry was much more the labs, where were more like mad scientist class.
Biochemistry was fun too.

Also. This is an entertaining story. But I am a bit disappointed that Stark has not been able to introduce a bunch of inventions that radically change Star Wars tech.
Andromedanaea chapter 7 . 7/25
Mantis is a human German/Vietnamese who was trained in Vietnam by Kree posing a Bhudist Monks. She is a martial artists of great skill with some mystical powers. She was part of a contest to see who could make the perfect woman. She won the contest and married a telepathic tree. After he baby was born, she gained the power to control plants and make new bodies for herself out of plants on other planets.
Andromedanaea chapter 2 . 7/25
Too many writers ignore the language learning problem, even when they SI their character into a baby. Language learning takes TIME. (or cheating)
BaddieDZ2 chapter 7 . 7/19
Hey, child, did you know you're allowed to cuss on the internet? Did you know you can say ASSHOLE and FUCK and SHIT in stories where the ADULTS ARE SWEARING?

Doin't write curse words if you're too mentally retarded to actually write the fucking curse word. Don't just FUCKING blank some FUCKING letters out.
Someguy the anon chapter 28 . 7/6
are the one AIs eventually going to take advantage of Tony's "call me anything" rule and just... insult him 24/7?
Graypdrink chapter 1 . 7/5
Well this was created before infinity war, and fact I admit to not see all the movies or even just parts doesn't full me with confidence this will be that good. Turning Wanda into something she's not.
Amun565 chapter 1 . 6/20
chapter 1 plausiblr beginning, but Spiderman sobbing because Tony went through a portal seems a bit weird and a tad inappropriate?
Guest chapter 27 . 6/20
Ch27. You just made my brain hurt. Finished reading page. Headache. Plz don't do it again.
Guest chapter 26 . 6/20
Ch26. Keep your chin up girl. Love Reading your story. Hope your schedules mesh together soon so you can cheer each other up. Good luck .
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