Seems like some parts of the story were removed

The first part alone is gold though

Oh? I can see other users reviewing chapters 2 and 3 but all I'm seeing is the first chapter. Were some parts of this story removed?

Anyways I like the premise and quite enjoyed Sayaka's musings on the monotonous farming aspects of her magical existance. Wasn't quite expecting the turn of dark humor but I dig itm

This story was both funny and dark! Sayaka reminds me of Darkwing Duck because of her attitude (if you haven't heard of that it's a really funny superhero cartoon from a long time ago). I think it's cool that she became a magical girl to be like the superheroes on TV too.

You know, considering how strong magical girls are, even if Sayaka had cut off his arm, the force of his knife being knocked out of his hand probably would've broken ever single bone in his hand. And if she moved at full speed wouldn't she just be a fucken blur?

Anyways, nice work Sayacuck you've done it again. Fantastic work. And if there are wraiths around this is before the wraith Arc and Homura remembering Madoka.

hahaha oh Madokami, Sayaka here is totally nuts! But I enjoyed this episode of the Ally of Justice. Poor Sayaka, being a hero in real life isn't like anime!

Well, well, my freind~

Hoo-rrah! 1st Review, Btches!

Ok, well, oh man, this was...definitely something. LOL

The opening was quite the stark contrast to the second half of this chapter. However, it was a lovely start, with Homura's resounding resolution and determination to keep Madoka safe, and the two coming to a loving understading. *O* Like, wow~that resolve by Homura.

And then...uhhh...huuuuuh...Ok...and then, well...there's...that second half. :P Full...Metal...R***st. Ok...soooo...that's...definitely something. LOL

For some reason, that last part...that was definitely *you*, my friend. Like...you sure like your sudden, absolutely ridiculous story endings, don't'cha? XD That's you, man, and that's what makes you, you. :3

In any case, Mission Complete! Even if, y'know, the story ended like it did here. LOL Again: that's just you, and that's Ok. :3

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

I don't get it.
To much ooc.

Well, well, my friend...

This was...some...pretty heavy stuff, fo' shu.

Mami-san laying a verbal smackdown on Sayaka for her absolutely careless mistake when she brought that creep to the hospital and then, bailed...that was pretty bad, but deserved...and then...holy. Fucking. Shit. O.o Oh wow...and *then!*

Like...wow...Mami-san's revelation to her friends of what happened that time...oh my God...wow...that was like...like...I...I dunno what to say, really. DX Poor Mami-san...poor Sayaka...damn.

However, well, things took a much needed, appreciated, lighter turn as Mami-san forgave Sayaka and then, comforted her after her previous verbal barrage and heart-wrenching revelation.

And then, dat Kyouko? X'D That was friggin' hilarious. LMAO Like...wow. LOL That was seriously a hilarious ending~ XD

Great work, my friend! Keep it up! :3
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Good two chapters. Hooray!

This is getting really good

I really didn't expect that from Mami, but knowing her, I feel like that would be something she would do, especially considering what happened when she found out about witches and where they come from.

Still, this was pretty funny. I've got to HAND it to Sayaka: she really screwed up. She's really gonna need an ARMy to solve this issue

(These are almost as fun as Mami head puns)

Oh my god, this may be the most hilarious thing I've seen off this site

Well, well, my friend...

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches!

Help! I'm laughing! I'm laughing way too friggin' hard! X'D

Oh my God, ohhh wow~ X'D Just...holy shit, this was...LOL Wow. That's quite the epic superhero fail for Sayaka, huh? Wow. XD She's such a dumbass. This ain't no comic book, man~ This ain't no comic book. Just...wow. She tried to save a maiden in distress and, Ok, she kinda~? succeeded...but there were clearly some...variables...she didn't take into account, such, as, y'know...a man's arm getting cut clean off. :P

Still, wow. XD This was absolutely ridiculous. Great job~! XD

Semper-Fi! Carry on!