I would have liked for the scene where he gives life back to Elisa to have been more detailed. Just my preference. :) It felt rushed to me.

Wish I'd read this sooner. The movie was somewhat disappointing and you are filling in the gaps beautifully.

I really like this story just as much as I love the movie. 3
But I think it’s a bit sad that we don’t se what happened with Elisa and Shape (as I have decided to name him)
I would have loved to see how their life together turned out.

I just saw this movie and it rocked

Another amazing chapter! I love Elisa's interactions with the Asset and Hoffstetler's reaction when he discovered their relationship

Oh I love your take on the meeting during which Elisa makes him discover music. His reaction is so pure and genuine: glowing in pink and yellow and trying to catch the sounds!

Again very good chapter with great descriptions of the characters's thoughts. The multiple and fast changes of point of view can be a little confusing/overwhelming but other than that, I love it

What an amazing first chapter! You write his thoughts just as I imagined them. It feels so natural and in character and you can truly feel the depth of his emotions. I love everything about this so far.

Wow I didn't realize that you had written this story before you watched the film. I have to say u make the whole story even more beautiful!

This is beautifully written, and even I have watched the films, it is still interesting to read. And you portrait their mindsets so precisely that make me feel like knowing them better.

This was absolutely fantastic! Obviously you were pretty spot on. I loved how romantic this was. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story!

Oh my gosh. I must say that movie is a bit strange. But this...I am moved. You really pulled on my emotions. This is beautiful. In an odd, metaphorical kind of way. Damn, the feels!

This is perfect, thanks for taking the time to write this and allowing us to read :)

Beautiful writing. So talented.

Omg loved it!