Reviews for When You Fall
CocoBe78 chapter 3 . 6/9
Ich hab soooo gehofft, dass Wolfram und Yuri wieder zusammen kommen.
Es war eine tolle Geschichte!
Ciel chapter 3 . 3/25
This is so beautiful and deep! Unlike other stories, yours really have the depth and the realistic fact in it. I really love this. I hope to read more from you. Cheers!
Arius Starwalker chapter 3 . 7/25/2019
This was really good! The idea was different and much appreciated than most!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2019
This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read on this site. Thank you.
Alejhandora chapter 3 . 5/26/2019
Every moment, every word, I have loved it totally, your vision of the two is something beautiful, for that reason, Yuuri and Wolfram in the manga have a different attitude than anime, but see a new story where there is no woman in their midst that makes them separate or the Yuuri idea wanting to find a princess as the main reason for their separation, but he remained alone, trying to be more mature and a good king, in the end I think he wanted to meet the expectations of Wolf, but did not realize. Really I like it so much your story!
Pretty week!
MiuraWtr chapter 3 . 5/21/2019
epilog~ I want ... it! XD
MiuraWtr chapter 2 . 5/21/2019
I also eber think "What about Yuuri have healer magic?" cause he bear Julia's soul

good work
you execute the story smoothly
thankyou
aaannndddd
what about make another wolfyuu fanfic? XD
MiuraWtr chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
aaaaaa
this is the one I looking for
Wolfyuu!
oh my God
this is so good
the story is so complicated
and I ... touched
love u
love yuuri
love wolfram
Lavender chapter 3 . 4/16/2019
Oh my dear Lord, I love how you compose your story, its very good, something I rarely find in a fanfiction. LOVE LOVE LOVE! More of these please!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2019
This was such a beautiful story! That ending was just so perfect and so sweet!
CG chapter 3 . 1/7/2019
I think the story is very good. I love the plot and the fact that Yuuri had a more nuanced approach to his initial rejection of Wolfram's love. I really would have liked if you included a lovemaking scene and an epilogue with a wedding to show the culmination of their journey and the eight years they spent apart. I hope that's something you can add because I think it would really make the story complete. Thanks
MissShiningStar chapter 3 . 6/5/2018
Your story gave me goosebumps at so so many instances! Yuri tending to Wolfram's wounds, Wolfram calling on Yuri's lie about them having a conversation, the entire oath part that Wolfram is given the title of Lord Bielefeld, and finally Yuri spinning his Maoh magic at the end of the war.. Writing war scenes is quite a feat in itself that you have accomploshed so beautifully.. And to weave a romance in that so well, so mind-blowingly well, is all the more difficult. The details of the healing and the war casualties made the story so much more tangible and real
jiesuzuru rem chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
I ended up crying at moat of the chapters ..
Is there a sequel?
Amixli chapter 3 . 4/6/2018
Oh my gosh... This was the cutest Yuram story I ever readYour reasons for the break up was so totally yuuri and it was sad all the same.

The idea of the story alone is awesome, but what you done with it is breath taking. I was so absorbed in this story I totally forgot my surroundings xD

This story is amazing and I hope it wasn't the last Yuram story from you.
AnubisEvadne chapter 3 . 2/6/2018
I totally can tell and I AM JUST TOO GLAD YOU ARE CAUSE I LOOOOVE READING ROMANCE hahahahahaha

Sorry, I'm just so excited! You made my feelings fly all over the place. For a moment I really thought you would kill one of them and i was like 'please nooooo, i need a happy ending!' And here we are... with such a wonderful, cute, ROMANTIC ending.

I must say that your way of writting them is amazing. In some way I could totally pass this as canon. For a momento I hesitated about the part where Yuuri has to kill Dai Cimaron soldiers but all the feelings he has about that make it real.

I love how mature you made Wolfram after leaving the castle, it makes a lot of sense that he dedicated his soul to his career and because of that he became to understand the situation, keep contact with Greta and still understanding and supporting Yuuri. Those moments on the garden are beautiful!

And OMGOSH! When Wolf says 'I love you' akjsdfñiahsdfajsdf my heart exploded *no kidding* hahahaha I love it. I love it. I LOVE IT. How manly Wolf is in here. He makes honor to his title of 'Prince'... I would love to be Yuuri.

I don't have enough words to tell you how much I loved your FF! Thanks a lot for sharing your love for these two 3
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