Aw this was a lovely chapter. I hope you continue this soon! Take care

This story is so great, I really hope you’ll update soon!

Finally Tina can stop pushing him away now. I think deeeeep down she knew he wasn’t in love with Leta, it was just a defence mechanism

I just read the whole story and I'm loving it! Please continue!

I love this story! You created interesting and complex characters. I also found it amazing how you are still able to incoperate elements from the second film although you already had a storyline based on the first film. You are very talented, and I look forward to reading the next chapters. Thank you so much for writing this!

nice ch

So I just found your story and I'm already hooked! Amazing work you got right here! I was afraid the plot of COG was going to prevent from enjoying your storyline but not at all, your story flows very naturally! I was also afraid that you were going to make Leta and Theseus the archetypal ''bad guys'' so I'm real glad you didn't, I mean they are interesting complex characters so I'm glad you didn't cut that out! Oh and Newt and Tina... So much angst, I really enjoy the way your taking your time to tell their story! Can't wait for the rest of it!

I liked how you gave Tina a small sense of deja-vu. Sometimes when I say something and realized I said the exact same thing in a sad or difficult time, it hits me, you know? Great chapter!

I certainly enjoyed it! Definitely worth the wait! So much angst... I'm looking forward to Newt and Tina sorting everything out and finally being happy!

Nice chapter! I love how you write Newt and Tina. Dramatic and so real.

Great story! Do you plan to continue it?

Love the fic! Very well written! Hopefully you have plans to possibly update soon?

Is this story over? Or will there be more?

NEED MORE

I'm glad the potion worked , and I hope she's gonna be fine.