Reviews for The Crucial Miscalculation
Guest chapter 14 . 10/5/2019
Such a good story! Love where this is going and can't wait to see more soon
Lynx chapter 1 . 4/11/2018
Really nice fic, I like the story and I'm curious to read what will happen next.
Please write more if you can. :)
Karmia chapter 8 . 1/25/2018
Aww, shoot. That was me with that last review, I forgot to log in. Anyway, for this chapter:
I was actually wondering when Morty would question his rick on what all this is about. I'm also insanely curious if this is a 'origin story' utilizing the theory that Evil Morty's Rick is canon Rick... hmmm, it would fit... I any case I'm looking forward in what direction and how far you're going to take this.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/25/2018
Goddammit, Ricks. Poor Morty just can't catch a break, can he? On another note, I think you convey Morty's confusion and emotional turmoil really well. You write Emotions very well, in general! And is this some sort of real backbone for Morty I see building there?
ric122-inactive chapter 7 . 1/12/2018
Bedtime Story with Jerry and Summer by ric122
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
Ho...ly...Fuck...
Karmia chapter 6 . 12/30/2017
Ouch, right in the feelings. Indeed, this was a great chapter, and I could really sympathise with Morty's confusion about all of this... Though I wonder why killing someone now affected him so much more, since I think he has canonically killed before.
Karmia chapter 5 . 12/23/2017
Oh, poor Morty...
I am in equal parts dreading and excited for what is to come, especially regarding Ricks actions from now on.
I loved how Morty did things on his own for a change, and his thoughts while doing it! Great chapter.
Karmia chapter 4 . 12/18/2017
Mmmmm... this one seems interesting...
Tho, in all honesty, I will look forward to updates on this, since it seems like a well written and interesting story.
abirdonalilactree13 chapter 4 . 12/17/2017
The Description of the planet is well done.
Also I like how Rick is portrayed.
Can't wait for an update.
brainy-brownie123 chapter 2 . 12/4/2017
Ooh great start! Can't wait to read more! Ughhhh stranded on a foreign planet geez that must suck
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
(For the damaged coda plays...)