Reviews for The Loser of Beacon
Visual Bliss chapter 3 . 9/19
Honestly the only way anyone in remnant would have a chance is to make all the characters not from RWBY indefinitely weakened or reborn with just aura and semblance
Santan Suprah chapter 4 . 2/18
damn i liked this one
SapphireAsashi chapter 4 . 1/24
Killing this off was the right thing to do.
Jajur von Hohenzollern chapter 4 . 5/21/2019
Im sad now this was actually good
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 4 . 5/13/2019
Pls update this is great!
TechnoGalen chapter 2 . 5/11/2019
Just looks like more forgiveness garbage.
TampaBayMike95 chapter 4 . 5/9/2019
nooooooo
KitsuneRose16 chapter 4 . 5/9/2019
Hey, man. You just do you. If you feel like you need a hard reset on what you write and the way you do it, then go for it. Just know that we as readers will enjoy anything you put out.
Kishinakutskikronoslvl78killa chapter 4 . 5/9/2019
Alright man, write when you can! You have great stories!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/4/2019
Please continue this story.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/3/2019
dear writer please make more chapters
reaperofages chapter 3 . 2/2/2019
good story please update want to read more
TampaBayMike95 chapter 3 . 11/15/2018
update soon please
NHarem Foreva chapter 3 . 9/20/2018
If Naruto has control of metal, why could he just use the big slab to make a huge 10 foot long spear or something, and send it shooting right through the Beringel’s entire body? He should have exactly zero use for dust as a projectile. Make a rifle, and make some bullets, then just use his metal powers to bring the used bullets back to him. Or even better, don’t bother making a gun, just use the semblance to shoot the bullets. He should also be able to make a floating disc of metal under his feet to float like Gaara does with his sand. It seems like you’re trying to deadlock Naruto into a certain role that his semblance should naturally grant him an easy way out of.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/27/2018
dear writer please make more chapters
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