I just wanna write this review to ask if anybody knows what have happened to the story or author now that he haven't written anything in the last 2 years not even updating his profile about if he have stopped making stories completly or something else.

If anybody knows you can Pm me about i really loved the story and is sad that it haven't had an update for a while.

...well he wasn't kidding when he said his soul was getting crowded with all the stuff he was putting in there... Avalon must be getting jealous...

My God this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue

Ugh, everything's too convoluted now.

buen cap muy entretenido gracias por subir esto por favor continua subiéndolo

This was a great read but somehow the direction that it took was a major turn off(for me at least). I actually liked the fic when it first started, however I quickly realized that your version of Shirou is pretty OOC. The way he discards his ideas, the way he talks about his past so easily, the way that he adresses his past acquantances(especially Sakura), and most of all the fact that Rin's classes from Zelretch, which made Rin be by Shirou's less, lead to their breakup. This was a pretty good read but when the AkenoxShirou ship got real it was a major turn-off for me. Good writing skills tho. :)

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I don't know about you, but Shirou feels weird af. I reread it now that I have time to actually digest it, but something is up.

He explains his reasons about wanting to be a hero, his ideals, but he's not like that to anyone not really connected to him. He's not phased by cute things either, so the reactions to Asia is weird.

For what it looks like, this is UBW Shirou, but I'm not sure. Shirou, even after the Clock Tower, seen in UBW Epilogue, isn't like this.

Nice

This was a wonderful read
I don't believe that you will continue, but I hope you would.
And a lot of people think the same.

Is Shirou actually from the DXD universe? That’s what it seemed like Amaterasu meant, she said he had been returned to them.
Anyway, I really hope that you continue and that it isn’t dead or abandoned, I just discovered it and I’m so hooked! I binged this whole thing, and you can really see how your writing improves, I think it would be even better now.
Anyway, please keep up the great work! I really hope that you do update this (soon)!
And stay healthy too!

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plissss continue the fic is very good

pliss cintinue the. fic is very good

Your awesome, please continue like this