I'm really enjoying this fanfiction story and I'm glad You're continuing! Thank You and good luck!

Hello! This is really good! I hope You keep writing... thank You! v

I really like the idea of the blood fruit that allows luffy to make a portal and move at gear second speeds. I am looking forward to future chapters

Soo goood. And yeah I agree, didn’t really see many things “stolen” from that other story. Wish the chapter was longer:)

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Wwwhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?! Why would you do ttthhhhhiiiiiiissssss? Giving Luffy a different devil fruit! Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!?

dude not only dd u copy this ffrom that story'a God amongst us' but u used a lame fruit that doesnt work with luffy's Chi fruit,water-water along with Bird,wolf mythical zone fruits are useless if only u had used a element type logai..

I don't mean to be THAT person but pleeaase update. I can't wait for shit to hit the fan ;)

I really liked the chapter. Thank you for updating 3

Ooooh boy now it's getting good. Can't wait for the next update!

Oh man

Redo this chapter, garp has haki dumbass

Update soon as you can please.
PD: The portal thing its pretty epic

Thanks for the chapter!

Update pleeease