| Reviews for The Cult |
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   mc-squishy chapter 1 . 4/21 this is so amazing! I loved all of the parental roy and riza and how much the team cared about Ed! the hair braiding and the kisses are just too cute! |
| fluffykitty12 chapter 7 . 4/11 Maybe that's why all the victims had their bones broken. Ablsalom drinks his saliva tea and just keeps breaking their bones because he's pissed at the moon. Lol. For real though- great writing. Loving this fic. Also- it gets much more light hearted and funnier if you mis-read "Jones Brothers" as "Jonas Brothers". |
| Allinory chapter 11 . 3/15 Awww, the ending is the cutest |
| Allinory chapter 4 . 3/14 Omg I'm so enjoying all the Ed whump. It's so great. Hitting him, breaking his ankle, and now keeping him in heavy rain. Oh yes, give me plenty! Such a great story, and the writing is just... flawless. I love you for your fanfiction, although you may not even see this |
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/11 Judging by the brothers' dynamic, I'm assuming that Absalom is the oldest and Jeremiah is the youngest |
| Laws2Draw chapter 12 . 9/22/2019 This was so so so good! i loved it. you did well on the personality of the characters! oh, and promise me one thing, never stop writing. 3 |
| SilvermistAnimeLover chapter 11 . 7/20/2019 I keep reading Jones Brothers as Jonas Brothers, and it makes this whole fic rather entertaining. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/3/2019 Damn this was a really good story... 18 stars |
| ultimatequeenoffandoms chapter 12 . 5/12/2019 Ahhhhhh what a great story! i couldn't sit still at all while reading, i loved it! |
| SanityMissing chapter 10 . 2/25/2019 My dumb ass knows it says Jones Brothers but every now and again I read it as Jonas Brothers and get the shock of a lifetime |
| Victorian Rush chapter 12 . 2/2/2019 One thing I really love about Ed is that he is so selfless. He never thinks of himself and is always putting other people’s needs over his own. This story shows his character perfectly. Knowing that he was going to be tortured and evantually killed but that didn’t stop him from giving himself up to the brothers so Mustang and the rest of the military can solve the murders. My heart broke for him the whole time I was reading when we saw how much torture the brothers were putting him through. Thank god the team managed to solve the murders and save Ed before they killed him. I really love this story, it is truly a great read. Stupendous work on this and it is going to my favs. |
| GunsAndMagic chapter 11 . 9/2/2018 Truly amazing story! |
| GunsAndMagic chapter 12 . 8/13/2018 3 |
| Bookwormbybee chapter 12 . 5/23/2018 Fantastic story. Well written and well thought out. And I really have to applause your characterization of Havoc. Not many people write about him and it can be hard to find well written stories that have him characterized correctly good job. |
| Bookwormbybee chapter 11 . 5/22/2018 AWWW THAT'S ADORABLE! loved it! Parental!Roy/Riza is just so perfect. |
