*howl*

My god, that was just plain adorable. :D It's cute enough with the chicobo following its mother around in the game whenever Squall catches a chocobo, but a chicobo following Squall is just too cute! Hehe . . .

Great Hyne, I'm in love.

This would be great if continued. We'll get all sorts of cute possibilites brewing in our little heads (Paternal Squall, anyone?).

Very funny! And they all act in character, which is hard to find in funny fics. Good job!

Great story! It's so cute and funny! _ I totally love how the little chocobo thinks Squall's his mommy! _

LOL! I love it! So cute! _

This is just so, so funny. I love Irvine's laid back commentary, and the way he winds Zell up. But Squall and the chicobo... it's kept me smiling all day. Thank you, Pax! Do more humour, please _

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