| Reviews for Phantom Pains |
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Guest chapter 11 . 12/19/2019 Nooo! Cliffhangers! ;-; Wait, close to the end? You don't mean the end of the story, do you? It's pretty great, I hope it lasts longer. But I'm not the one in control of it, so I'll just have to wait and see. I hope you continue eventually. Thanks for writing, and have a good rest of the day/night! |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/19/2019 O.O Wuh-ohhhh. I should've KNOWN this would happen! Noise, you might've messed up a bit. I'd be like Sonic too at this point; I hate it when my friends are held captive in possible danger and I have no idea where they are (I'm speaking from roleplay experience). If Noise's powers are connected to Infinite somehow, I'm worried about how he's holding up right now :( It's nice of Flint to go looking for Infinite. Maybe he could get his squad back somehow. Also, I love the things from Sonic X, Dark Sonic (well, everyone loves Dark Sonic, so other much there) and the Shovel Claws! Unless they were in another Sonic game. I haven't played many of the main Sonic games (and I call myself a Sonic fan? :( Well, it's not my fault I don't have the consoles for them!). It's been so long since I've read this, but on to the next chapter! |
Black Twilight Wolf chapter 11 . 4/21/2019 Noise is the villain. Government Agents trying to capture villains to experiment on them and get them under their control. The only solution wipe the slate clean |
Infinite's Ruby chapter 10 . 3/26/2019 Whoa, this chapter overall is fantastic. Out of the members of the Jackal Squad, Flint is so far my favorite member. I love the fact he does bring up the point even though Zero betrayed the Jackal Squad; it's still a nice touch seeing him possibily heading by himself to locate his former leader. The action scenes, especially the fight against Noise, is an intense sequence with Dark Sonic making an appearance adding tension to the chapter as a whole. I'm on the edge of my seat, eagerly waiting to see what's going to happen next. Great job with this chapter! I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 9 . 2/21/2019 I'm assuming they still think Infinite has his powers, right? I'm not sure if they'd want his help if they knew he didn't. I saw your art! I think you draw really well. Now I know how Noise looks! Speaking of Noise, I wonder what he wants Eggman to build. It can't be good. He also said he's looking for someone. I think we know now that he wasn't part of the Phantom Ruby experiment like Infinite was since Eggman doesn't know him. Thanks for another chapter! Have a good rest of the day/night. |
Infinite's Ruby chapter 9 . 2/18/2019 Dang, this chapter is worth the wait and despite it being a setup chapter you did a great job setting up where the plot's going to go from here. The character interactions in this are wonderful especially with Sonic's concern for Tails, along with Noise appearing before Eggman, every single character interaction is well written. Noise confronting Tails, that scene alone left me with a chill down my spine. You did a great job conveying Tails' terror which alone has me scared for Tails. I hope he's going to be okay. You did an excellent job with this chapter! I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 8 . 1/21/2019 He took Tails?! NO! He BETTER not do anything to him! Gah, now I can't wait for the next chapter! What'll happen?! On another note, if Sonic is skittish at the prison because of his time on the Death Egg, that's a nice touch. Well, it's confirmed that Infinite and Noise are connected somehow. Is it every time Noise uses the Phantom Ruby-like powers that it affects Infinite? That seems to be the case. And art for the story?! OH YEAH! I'm so down for that! I'd love to see it! Well, I'll continue checking for the next chapter! Have a good rest of the day/night, and thanks for this chapter! |
Infinite's Ruby chapter 8 . 1/12/2019 With every chapter, this fic keeps getting better and better — the plot of trying to find out who Noise is intriguing. I'm taking a guess since Noise possibily has a connection with Infinite if he's experiencing those visions. I'm greatly enjoying this story. Keep up the excellent work! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. |
LuigiWife1551 chapter 8 . 1/12/2019 The character Noise sounds pretty interesting- I can’t wait for the art! |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/23/2018 Either I don't know, or I forgot what happened to the Phantom Ruby. If it wasn't destroyed or sent to another dimension or something like that, then could Noise be some kind of manifestation of the Ruby? That would explain why he can use the powers without seemingly having it. Does Eggman know about Noise? If he doesn't, then he's probably not a subject. As for why Infinite is getting these visions, could it be because of Noise somehow? Or is it just after-effects of having the Phantom Ruby being a part of him? Thanks for another chapter, and have a good rest of the day/night. |
fanakatsuki chapter 7 . 11/21/2018 A new villian. Love him |
Infinite's Ruby chapter 7 . 11/21/2018 You don't have to apologize for the long wait. It's understandable you were busy with exams and your studies, I'm sure you did well in them. The plot's beginning to thicken now, especially with Infinite experiencing visions, along with Noise, being able to use the Phantom Ruby's powers without touching it. I can tell Sonic, and his allies aren't going to be happy to see Infinite again, after the jackal aiding Eggman in conquering the world. Keep up the amazing work, I can patiently wait for the next chapter. Your health and happiness should come first. I'll be sure to see you for the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/16/2018 Yep, I'd say Zero is good. I forgot that's what they called him during development. What'll happen to Infinite? I hope they don't kill him :( And poor Flint, he didn't make it in time to help Infinite. I will be awaiting the next chapter! Thank you! |
mari3451 chapter 6 . 10/15/2018 How often do you update this story? |
Infinite's Ruby chapter 6 . 10/15/2018 I've always liked the headcanon that Infinite's real name was Zero since it really does add potential to the whole Zero becoming Infinite thing. The brief scene Zero has with Flint is rife with tension since I doubt Flint would want any more harm to come to the rest of the Jackal Squad while showing his distrust towards his former leader is realistic considering the circumstances. Seeing both Team Dark and the Crow bounty hunters clashing against the Jackal Squad is rife with action. Having Shadow and Infinite fighting once more, is so well done and that cliffhanger at the end has left me intrigued as to what's going to happen next. Amazing work as always. Keep up the great work and I'll see you for the next chapter. |