God you made Naruto look like some lame try hard wannabe tough guy.

So far so good.

A bit of friendly advice:

If this is going to be a crossover, than you need to have elements from Naruto as well. Then you also have this too close to RWBY canon, which I respect, since its your story, but with RWBY, you actually have more potential to work with.

Faunus are pretty much treated like the mutants from Marvel, so you can work angles with the White Fang being similar to the Brotherhood/Sisterhood of Mutants, or Magneto's Acolytes.

Even some of the semblences can work like the mutant powers, with Neo's being pshchosomniac illusions like Regan Wyngarde.

Salem herself, is like Apocalypse, so you have a lot to work.

Then, you can have groups like the FoH, and the Purifiers you can work in, though I advise toning both down, since both groups are extremists.

You can also have Ospin be the Professor Xavier for his students, with teams RWBY, JNPR, CFVY, and others be the X-Men.

Hmm!

Interesting

KO awesome chapter, well that investigation went well and they survive battling a mech suit as they now have to return on what they found out and relax from their secret mission though I don’t think all of them will relax.

Awesomeness

Awesome chapter continue please.

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next

Awesome l
Please continue

Please keep this one going it is such a good story

please make more chapters

no te preocupes esperarehasta el proximo capitulo , estuvo bueno y e interesante

please make more chapters

This story is terrible. There is no difference what so over between this crossover and actual Cannon RWBY. If you’re going to make a crossover but not change anything to cannon then don’t write a story

Why even bother with this? All this forced meetings, why not just have them, oh maybe meet at fucking school instead of this.

also, this is just straight up canon, Naruto makes no difference to events.