Reviews for The Actual Answer |
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Faraway-R chapter 1 . 10/4/2019 Regretfully, you will need to reword something. Kakashi here said: "He'll remain tied to that pole. You're not allowed to feed him. You've got like, fifteen to twenty minutes to eat and get ready. I'll be back." The first sentence is the problem. To allow Naruto to eat himself, Sasuke pulled out a kunai and presumably set him free. That goes against Kakashi's instructions, so... Please either change Kakashi's instructions (for example have him say "I'll leave Naruto tied to that pole" which technically removes the instruction), or change Sasuke's actions, or give us an outtake where Kakashi or Hiruzen remarks the trio did disobey him in the end. |
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 11/22/2018 Better than canon. Kudos for that. |
laurajustin chapter 1 . 11/1/2018 Great story! |
Son of sea 9 tail chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 Haha |
T51b Moridin chapter 1 . 8/15/2018 Lol that's kinda funny. |
KuroHinata chapter 1 . 5/11/2018 wow. I'm an idiot. just realize it when I read what Sasuke said. I keep thinking the same thing as canon . just share the food. maybe I didn't think of it even though I was pissed off when Naruto was still tied up when Team kakashi left. |
tati1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2018 lol |
ObscureAbsurdity chapter 1 . 3/14/2018 A satisfying little one-shot. |
Kronus96 chapter 1 . 12/17/2017 How did I never think of this? It’s so simple it’s brilliant. I’m not sure if they were capable of plans like this until Shippuden, but it’s awesome so who cares? Sarutobi’s approval at the end was really funny. I don’t get why it amused me so much, I just know I loved it. Thanks for writing. |
Jetiq chapter 1 . 12/11/2017 Ok that was hilarious. :) Nice oneshot |
Mernom chapter 1 . 12/3/2017 Make sense. |
MidnaMoo chapter 1 . 12/2/2017 Haha that's great! |
OSR fanatic chapter 1 . 11/24/2017 Great Story! :) Update Soon! :) |
SoulOfAFangirl684 chapter 1 . 11/24/2017 Huh. This was really short, and up until almost the end I thought it was just going to be a very brief, only slightly different retelling... And I guess it kind of was... But I still love where you went with this. It feels like such a simple answer, but is technically true and still allows for them to pass his test while following the rules. So this was... interesting. Thank you for making me think. |
Comrade Broseph chapter 1 . 11/24/2017 Nah. See this version of events has Sakura showing initiative and being somewhat useful. This immediately makes it immersion breaking :) Just joking, it's all good. |