please update, it's interesting

You are right about the spirits. xD. Are you gonna continue this story? It sounds so promising

More please!

Lol Pokémon is my favorite show in the world! Please update soon!

I loved the description you came up with for the hunting dogs! In my imagination they just turned out so beautiful! But I hope you continue on with this story as well. And if you need any help for ideas you can totally shoot me a message! Or just for a proofread
Not gonna lie be prepared for a span of notifications from me, I’m totally gonna go read all your LaLu stories now Keep up the great work so far though!

Please continue this!

Gotta catch em all lololol!

Lol Jerza!

Wow... no words!

I’m not liking that lawyer!

Liking this so far!

No, no deleted scene the ally has to happen for that Duke. Or get the princess involved. Something about forcing the marriage contract even after it was terminated. He deserves so much pain.

Also I feel like the mission should have some detail to it. With maybe a little foreshadow of how it deals with the Duke. Sink him even further when everything comes to light.

Okay... I have a feeling I am going to hate Edward more than what I already do...

I’ve never seen this idea no before. I hope this story turns out great. You are off to an amazing start so far. I also enjoyed how you gave her the ability to speak French. It’s not surprising considering her background.

Merry Christmas. I’m off to read your last two chapters.

Hahaha that ending was hilarious. I would love some more Erza teasing