this is good it would probly make a good addition to the chrono saga continue it

p-p-p-please (ala roger rabbit)

Hm, interesting.

I have no idea what's going on; I give up. I'm not trying to sound mean, but you know how I have no idea when it comes to CT. Explain this to me sometime.

Well, I don't like the *'s saying where the story is- I like it when you say where you are with the characters. And you introduced the characters pretty quickly... could you space the story out more? it hurts to read