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Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 1 . 3/13 Junk |
tammgrogan chapter 5 . 5/28/2019 Hello, I wanted to let you know how very much I have enjoyed reading this Amazing story. It has been over a year scent your last update, and hopefully you can find the time to come back and finish writing this wonderful story. If not, then Thank you for sharing what you have written of it. |
Dairegh chapter 2 . 5/20/2018 Well, let's see. It's a HxHr fic, so hopefully that'llbe tastefully done. Personally, I'd like to see a slow burn romance but I guess I'll just have to see what you've done there in the next few chapters. I don't think the Grangers' reactions to all this are unrealistic, in fact I can positively feel the impotent frustration and mixed relief they seem to be experiencing. Well done on the characterization and relatability, there. I'm really hoping this doesn't turn into a betrothal fic... It'd just feel like... an overused and unnecessary mechanic to fuel what already looks like a promising relationship. |
Jarvey chapter 5 . 4/30/2018 A novel story with nuanced take. Well done |
ATiredDude chapter 5 . 4/16/2018 I really like this story. I've only seen one or two stories in all the years of reading HP fanfiction with Hermione becoming a werewolf, so it had my interest from the start. I liked how you portrayed Dumbldore as not the evil manipulator, but simply a busy old man that made mistakes. I like how he is working to fix those mistakes. I am interested to see how the trial goes, and Lucius's plan, and the Tri-Wizard tournament next year. I kinda get why you're hard on Ron, and you've explained his reasoning well, and why it's so faulty. I am interested to see if you will have him grow up and become perhaps not a close friend, but someone respectable. He is after all 13. A personal hope of mine is that you include Luna as a good friend of Hermione and Harry, I always enjoy authors using such a quirky character. I hope to read more from you, and that you'll find a way past the writer's block afflicting you. Thank you for posting such a wonderful story for us to read. I hope you have a nice day. |
Deathday Party Planner chapter 4 . 4/16/2018 Interesting story. I'm a Harmony fan, not a Dumbledore fan. Unfortunately, your Dumbledore doesn't mitigate the after image left by JKR's incomplete characterization of her monster puppet master. |
jamesdf chapter 5 . 4/13/2018 I am really enjoying this story along with most of your others. However the one thing I find jarring about this story is that you are trying to show Dumbledore as not evil or manipulative but what is on the page disputes this to a degree. I can accept, based upon what is written so far that he is not evil, in this story, but the unveiling of his actions, in regards to Harry, so far appears to show someone who has misused his positions and authority. The fact that his actions were not due to malicious intent is only a mitigating factor it does not dismiss them in any way and he should be held accountable in some form at the very least losing the positions of authority he abused,an action that he appears not to have considered being another mark against him. |
Drithligh chapter 1 . 4/11/2018 Interesting... I'm usually okay with Remus being a werewolf, but suddenly it seems horrible if Hermione is infected. |
Tyler'sPrincess chapter 5 . 4/8/2018 Well written! I can't wait for more. Update soon please! |
Blaze1992 chapter 5 . 4/4/2018 Hmm seems okay so far though I am curious on why Hermione is always getting the fluffy bad luck and not harry himself on FF. Now I do have some question's about this fic currently 1st since this started post AU 3rd year what happened during the earlier years did they follow canon to a T or were somewhat AU as well? 2nd Is harry going to be near canon-like or be far better than his canon self? |
Mateos chapter 5 . 4/3/2018 Thanks for the new chapter. I very much liked the portrayal of Sorting Hat and the interaction between Dumbledore and the hat. Hope to see the next chapter soon. |
annasfanfic chapter 5 . 4/1/2018 3 |
syed chapter 5 . 3/31/2018 I alway had this idea that Harry could combine the deathly hollow symbol with a lightning bolt, to use as his personal sigil. As heir to both pervelle and grindleward, he does have have a very valid claim. Since Sirius was innocent, I could see Harry writing to his grandfather as a pen pal. As a dark lord he must have collected some stuff, books, material and artifacts. Sme might have been preserved, so allow access. Also, this guy had visions of the future, so that means Harry might actually have some divination potential, even if limited. Also, that mean the old history lady is his many times great aunt as she was related to Gellbert. Those history books could be very useful. She as an author must have her own collection. I want to see Harry tell petunia that her grand dad was a wizard, and it is possible Dudley could have magical children. |
twilliams1797 chapter 5 . 3/31/2018 beta stuff: 'a note insubstantial number of galleons' Note... that's the only blip I found. hopefully, there is a way to stop Lucius from messing with Hermione, maybe Harry call out his Grindiwaldian heritage or something. I don't ever recall a Hermione as werewolf story, though I am sure some have been written a positive thing that your writer's block has incurred.. I don't remember the story and I read it all from the beginning, and enjoyed it all over again. |
twilliams1797 chapter 4 . 3/31/2018 the part where the Director straightens his coat and cricks his neck, I imagined Agent Smith from the Matrix, only Goblin... now, inheritance from the Grindiwald line.. that's one I have never seen, plus confirmation that Grindiwald is still alive, not to mention the fact of Lily's ancestry, I guess Gellert went both ways.. |