I really liked reading this story. But I don't think this is the last we'll see of Krosynis. Keep up the good work!

Nice

Your OC villain is actually pretty good. I can totally see him in Lolirock canon. Of course, the only problem is that you made him OP, but not without reason. This is an OC done well, but not masterfully, only that he can't be considered a Gary Stu.