| Reviews for Freedom |
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ZexyZane chapter 5 . 7/30 Oh my God, I have mixed feeling now. Used to like it at first but each chapter just keeps on getting darker and darker. All I wanted was some good old fashioned Loudcest is that too much to ask for?!...*Ahem*... Sorry. |
nightmaster000 chapter 5 . 7/12 Oh awesome and spicy chapter with some great mother/son action. :) As well as seeing bridge between Luan and Lincoln start to get repaired. Though Rita it seems has had it with Luna and actually kicked her ass out of the house. What will happen next on that front? Finally it seems Clyde finds a unexpected visitor in Belle who it seems is in desperate need of help. All together excellent work and chapter. |
Shaeril McBrown chapter 5 . 6/21 Can you make a chapter about they saved Lily and Leni sings her a lullaby |
nuuo chapter 5 . 12/10/2019 Awesome to see new chapter! Feel bad not commenting sooner, I feel the Ritacoln is a bit misplaced in chapter five. Much as I like and wish to see more of Rita, feels like a more vanilla approach would have been better. |
Sunblast X chapter 5 . 12/6/2019 Nice. Thanks for using my idea of Rita breastfeeding and having sex with Limcoln to cheer him up. And don't forget the ideas I gave you about how Lincoln gets revenge upon Lynn and Luna. |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/3/2019 Leni sure showed herself to be an example of "beware the nice ones" and I'm curious to see what role the McBride Family will play later on. |
badgerxavier chapter 4 . 4/16/2019 please keep this going, I just fell in love with the story and Beatrice, so please just keep going for the sake of humanity and this story. |
Sunblast X chapter 4 . 1/9/2019 Wow, and I thought he'd rape Luna out of revenge. I mean, Leni did the same thing to him as the other girls, but she doesn't treat him like crap is more forgivable. Anyway, nice chapter |
nuuo chapter 4 . 1/6/2019 Really enjoyed new chapter! Love reading Lincoln and Lisa moments, love to see how more absurd it would get. Luna's attitude is like a mystery but feel its just guilt making her aggressive. I don't think I understand if we're still in the little sister arc or if we're transitioning hard to older sister arc. Think I like first two chapters best still, they hint that Lincoln gets involved with older sisters but not abused like in ch. 3. Keep up the good work still! |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/6/2019 I was surprised by Carlota being mentioned but it sounds like Ronnie Anne will be showing up soon, so we will probably be seeing more of their family in time. Luna was sure a bitch in this chapter, I didn't feel sorry for her when Rita slapped her. |
Delquea chapter 4 . 1/5/2019 wut |
nightmaster000 chapter 4 . 1/5/2019 Well it seems that Lisa got a bit more than she could handle or was expecting there, but she most certainly enjoyed the experience. Plus it's good to see that she isn't treating Lincoln like their older sisters are. Also good to know that things are starting to get better between Lincoln and Leni now after this. I also enjoyed Leni's punish fuck as well. The lemon between Beatrix and Lucy was certainly unexpected but quite enjoyable. :) Also it seems Beatrix has someone to help her with her current crisis in Lucy as well. Finally dramatic/angst filled end for this chapter in the huge confrontation/fight between Luna and Lincoln. As well as a painful revelation for Lincoln from Luna telling a dark/painful secret. I look forward to seeing what will happen next. :) |
King69 chapter 3 . 12/16/2018 I enjoy it |
kinkinnovich chapter 4 . 12/9/2018 Dafuq |
Dread55 chapter 4 . 12/9/2018 wait ... what? Was your acount haked? |