Definitely should be added to a novelization

This was an interesting story to read. It sort of makes sense that Captain Star's wife would spill the beans XD. I can see why she did it though because with Wildmask and Shadowpelt. Zebedee was pretty upset about it when he found out. Anyway, nice story!

Little Wildmask had done her job on keeping Zebedee in check, just like a good Rider should! Oh boy, Big Mac is going to be in a bit of trouble! It'll be interesting to see how it all goes down

Face it Zorran, you can't hide being a softie for long! I'm glad you hinted at Wildmask's future relationship with a certain someone. I think Captain Star would approve of thier relationship. This was a cute chapter!

Wolf is getting a little suggestive now XD. It won't be long and they'd be the talk of the port! Nice chapter, and keep up the good work.

I think Captain Star wouldn't mind it. Wildmask was absolutely adorable! Good work!

Oh boy, she's going to confess her feelings for Wolf. Now the question is how would he react? This was an interesting chapter. Good work!

Yay Wolf saved her! Aw, OJ is concerned about the two little hybrids! At least they're safe for now. Good work!

Oh no! Wolf better save her! Let's hope he can swim! This was a good chapter. Keep up the good work!

Sounds like Fiona loves a man with muscles. Hailey seems to enjoy messing with Wolf every once in a while. In all, nice work!

Hm.. do i smell a little bit of foreshadowing or is it just me? This was an interesting chapter, good work!

Once again Hailey spooked him! This is going to be interesting to see how it turns out! Great work!

It was pretty funny when Wolf was startled awake by Hailey! This sounds like it's going to be interesting!